After having a discussion with the management team and reviewing the documents submitted by ITAP to hire subcontractor for the position of auditor, we need several clarifications. Firstly, are the companies going through the process of full and open competition? We asked this because based on CFR 05/07 it is mentioned that …..
2007-05-08 15:34:33 · 7 answers · asked by niceasker 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
After a discussion with the management team and reviewing the documents submitted (to us) by ITAP we have concluded that in order to hire a subcontractor for the position of auditor, several things must be clarified:
Are the companies going through the process(es) of (a) full and open competition?
2007-05-08 15:55:16 · answer #1 · answered by rabble rouser 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
After discussions with the management team and reviewing the documents submitted by ITAP regarding hiring a subcontractor for the position of auditor, we need several clarifications. Firstly, are the companies in full and open competition? We ask this because CFR 05/07 mentions that …..
2007-05-08 22:50:02 · answer #2 · answered by Bethany 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
After having a discussion with the management team and reviewing the documents submitted by ITAP to hire A subcontractor for the position of auditor, we still need several clarifications.(something is not right here) Firstly, one has to ask if the companies are going through the process of full and open competition. We asked this because based on CFR 05/07 it is mentioned that …..
2007-05-08 22:44:36 · answer #3 · answered by Highly Favoured 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
1. Explain to the reader what ITAP means.
2. ". . . to hire a subcontractor . . . "
3. ". . . we needed several clarifications. . ." (use the past tense)
4. Lose the word Firstly. Instead, "The first question that must be asked are the companies . . . ?"
5. Explain what CFR represents unless the reader knows for certain what this abbreviation and ITAP means.
2007-05-08 22:46:39 · answer #4 · answered by Guitarpicker 7 · 1⤊ 2⤋
Supposing that "subcontractor" stood for the real name for a person, say, Joe Blow, it is correct.
If the specific word subcontractor is to be used in the sentence, it does need the article "a," as in "a subcontractor."
And yes, I too would delete the word "Firstly." Good business writing rule of thumb - omit needless words.
2007-05-08 22:48:51 · answer #5 · answered by Lynne O'Dwyer 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋
There are no grammatical errors. The expression, "to hire subcontractor" should read, "to hire a subcontractor" --(Insert the word, "a"). Otherwise it is perfect.
2007-05-08 22:40:51 · answer #6 · answered by yahoohoo 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
You need "a" before "subcontractor", but otherwise the grammar's O.K.
The style's a mess, though ...
2007-05-08 23:25:15 · answer #7 · answered by Bunky the Clown 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋