How sweet and lovely dost thou make the shame
Which, like a canker in the fragrant rose,
Doth spot the beauty of thy budding name!
O! in what sweets dost thou thy sins enclose.
That tongue that tells the story of thy days,
Making lascivious comments on thy sport,
Cannot dispraise, but in a kind of praise;
Naming thy name blesses an ill report.
O! what a mansion have those vices got
Which for their habitation chose out thee,
Where beauty's veil doth cover every blot
And all things turns to fair that eyes can see!
Take heed, dear heart, of this large privilege;
The hardest knife ill-used doth lose his edge.
2007-05-06 11:17:06 · 12 answers · asked by nightguard1 n 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Dude. YOU USED OLD WORDS! :D
2007-05-06 11:20:59 · answer #1 · answered by K 4 · 2⤊ 2⤋
Ohhh I am SO sorry. I just lost my guinea pig Piglet too. This made me think of her and I feel your pain. They're such lovely little critters. I hope your heart heals soon and know that Pip loved you and will see you when you get to the Rainbow Bridge.
2016-05-17 05:51:07 · answer #2 · answered by carmon 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Dude, you copied it word for word from a poem by William Shakespeare. It's his poem, Sonnet 095. What the hell? I know you posted this a long time ago, but why did you claim it as your own?
2013-10-20 09:41:54 · answer #3 · answered by Miiyu 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I personally think I will hold onto my star giving for now.
I do look forward to your future try outs with thy pen in hand.
2007-05-06 11:31:04 · answer #4 · answered by Nana 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Thats shakespeare
2007-05-06 11:28:27 · answer #5 · answered by Budlightgurl 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Someone is telling Porkies that is Sonnet 095 by William Shakespeare!!!!!! No star from me mate.
2007-05-06 11:24:30 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 1⤋
My, MY, that is Heavy, But very nice. You just may have a beautiful future there. Keep writing.
2007-05-06 11:25:57 · answer #7 · answered by minnetta c 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I love it. Have a star!
2007-05-06 11:20:05 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
I'm no expert, but is this not Shakespeare
2007-05-06 11:22:10 · answer #9 · answered by EvelynMine 7 · 1⤊ 2⤋
Sorry, I dont understand it at all..
2007-05-06 11:37:28 · answer #10 · answered by Japan_is_home 5 · 1⤊ 1⤋