Ok, this is for my g/f's birthday card. What do you think, do you think she'll like it? Any suggestions for improvement?
There once was a cool dude named Rudy
whose girlfriend at times was quite moody
but when he showed her his thing
she couldn't help sing
and show him her well tanned pa-tooty
.
2007-05-05 13:41:32 · 18 answers · asked by Rudy 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Then Rudy yelled hip..hip..hooray
Happy Hapy Birthday!
Love your limerick I just thought you might like to add a line like this..at the end..since it then says Happy Birthday!!
If she has a sense of humor and enjoys not just your wit..but the time you took..she will love it!!! I would.
To buy a card is not hard....!
Ciao!
2007-05-05 17:11:21 · answer #1 · answered by bodacious baby 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
1 out of 10
2007-05-05 13:46:56 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think she will laugh, Rudy. As limericks go, yours is unexpectedly clean, winks and elbow jabs included and she owes ya a kiss for originality and the spirit of capturing Limerick, Ireland. Ya did well because you did not leave out your engaging personality.
2007-05-05 13:50:15 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
properly, i like the way it began off all unhappy then ended with a chortle yet i might evaluate getting in a distinctive course. that's too plenty. specific traces does not would desire to be interior the poem. appears like your attempting too difficult to rhyme. you have ability basically loosen up bypass to a quiet room and positively write out of your coronary heart.
2017-01-09 13:46:25 · answer #4 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Now make sure you get down on one knee and ask for her hand in marriage directly after she reads the card. Im POSITIVE she'll say yes.
2007-05-05 13:46:53 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Thats a winner
2007-05-05 13:45:53 · answer #6 · answered by marsh 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Looks like a lot of thought went into it.
2007-05-05 13:44:32 · answer #7 · answered by Kiss My Shaz 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
put a gift certificate for tanning in the card.
2007-05-05 13:44:59 · answer #8 · answered by Notreadyforthis 1 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Good one
2007-05-05 13:45:44 · answer #9 · answered by fordperfect5 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
That's nasty. Write something sweet.
2007-05-05 13:44:57 · answer #10 · answered by Prayer Warrior 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋