i have to make a poem for English and it's due tomorrow what do you think about this one
I’m Sorry
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Your words go unspoken and the world will never know
It hurts so bad but the tears won’t flow
It’s a heart wrenching pain
More to lose than to gain
But there’s no escape
No light to lead you out
So it builds up inside ‘til it escapes through a shout
Wishing you hadn’t you hurt the one you love
So you look to the sky for help from above
But it never comes never saves the day
Because of the words that you refuse to say
Now they go unspoken and the world will never know
That it hurts so bad and your tears won’t flow
So in the end you lose a friend
And this cycle we call life repeats itself again
If only we could learn to forgive and forget
And live our lives with no regret
Pride’s not worth the misery
Just say I’m Sorry and let it be.
2007-05-03 17:22:20 · 4 answers · asked by little anna 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
I think it is a nice poem
2007-05-03 17:34:57 · answer #1 · answered by Nelson_DeVon 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
quite a nice poem
if u have confidence in ur self
why do u ask us and waste 5 points
2007-05-04 03:26:44 · answer #2 · answered by vaish_srimag 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's nice. did it have to rhyme? if so, "escape" doesn't rhyme with anything.
2007-05-04 00:26:46 · answer #3 · answered by :-D 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love it!
2007-05-04 00:26:51 · answer #4 · answered by debk 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋