What do you think about my poem "Without"?

Question

Ghostlights were shimmering against the blue,

as time and life were flying by.

Crisp air filled my lungs with dew,

drenched in thoughts of you and I.

An unfinished puzzle left on the floor,

pieces all strewn in the shape of doubt.

Forever wanting just a little more,

until reality decides what we can live without.





©AB07'

Answer 1

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Answer 2

I felt it also. It captures that piercing moment right in between when you can't make sense of it all.

Answer 3

i felt this one. It reminded me of when i ended a long relationship