Let me know what you guys think of these lyrics I wrote.....be honest.... =)
Here I am, Just a lying here, I hear your breath, I feel your heart. You twist my life, with you’re lies, I feel so cold, But you’re so warm…..Stay….With me….Tonight….You lead me on, just to rip me down, you hold my heart, I’m all yours, I feel so wronged, by your thoughts, feeling the hurt, inside my soul….Please….Let me….Go….This pain, Is so real, Your face, It lies to me, why can’t I, Just let this be, I have to hold, on to what I know….Don’t….Give up….On me….There we go, Into the silent night, Your eyes still lie, To me tonight, But there’s hope, Through those lies, I can see your soul, I know you care….Don’t….Lie….Tonight…. This pain, Is so real, Your face, It lies to me, why can’t I, Just let this be, I have to hold, on to what I know….I won’t….Give up….On you….You’ll….Save me….Tonight
2007-05-03 09:45:10 · 3 answers · asked by CJS GuitarMan 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
man forget her i really liked it. strange yes but very good. oh by the way you got a answer hey good luck cuz your pretty good
2007-05-03 09:56:13 · answer #1 · answered by ~amy~ 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Ok. I didn't want to answer because honestly it's a little "done". If you know what I mean. The lyrics make me think "haven't I heard that before?"
They are ok, you know, just "done".
2007-05-03 16:52:20 · answer #2 · answered by Logan and Ella's Mommy 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
your an awsome song writer
2007-05-03 16:54:47 · answer #3 · answered by helloo there. 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋