do you like it or not?

Question

I'm getting paler
And I can't sleep at night
I'm having hunger pains
Which I always seem to fight

I've lost 20 pounds now
I'm weaker than ever
I thought this would make me stronger
In fact, it even seemed clever

This is a bad habit
I can't seem to shake
If I keep doing this
I fear I will break

I wish I knew away
Out of this disaster
In fact I think
Suicide will be faster

I seem to die
A little more each day
I'm not fine
I don't think I'll stay

This place is too much
It puts me to shame
Nothing is ever okay
And I'm the only blame

I sit and watch
As the daylight goes by
And as I'm alone in my mind
I silently say goodbye


this is my other poem i wrote, do you like it. rate it 1-10? (1 being worst,10 being best) i'll be posting more poems soon.

p.s. im only 15 years old and im dealing with anorexia so this is a very meaningful poem to me.

Answer 1

I give this 10 ++..........You see, I don't like intellectual poems, that don't rhyme. This poem is good in content, meaningful, summarized well, and it jingles too....haha....Anyway, I think this poem is too good.
What about your anorexia? Is it anorexia nervosa, anorexia bulimia, or just general anorexia? Remember, you seem to be vibrant and jovial, don't yield yourself for this anorexia business. Now will you please have something to eat? :)

Answer 2

Yes i like the poem in all (9), but I don't get why anybody would go through anorexia. It is so bad for you and it makes you feel and look so much worse. You lose your hair and if you get really really skinny and your parents put you under control and make you eat disgusting food.

Ex: food like the fat on pork and beef.

You should probably get it under control before it gets severe, besides, wouldn't you rather feel better than :

I'm getting paler
And I can't sleep at night
I'm having hunger pains
Which I always seem to fight

&

I seem to die
A little more each day
I'm not fine
I don't think I'll stay

I hope there are people out there that are praying for you cuz i feel so bad for you that you've chose to go on that road of life. It's a horrible road to be on.

Answer 3

i'll rate it a 10. been there with the eating problem for most of my life and it ain't over. good luck !!!!

Answer 4

Hey that was great be proud of yourself & eat 10+

Answer 5

10 in detail/ like content,
but it's dark

Answer 6

8... now go eat a sandwich

Answer 7

good good poem

Answer 8

2,5