I'm way far from perfectAnd ill never be close Theres better then me
But I'm who he chose I cry for no reasonI get mad real fast
But still he loves me and swears that we'll last
When i get worried and don't know what to do
i look to him to help me when i have absolutely no clue
He deals with my problems deals with my tears deals with my mood swings
and deals with my fears.Everything i put him through he still stays strong
Loves me no matter what and seems so carry on
No matter what i do He'll love me till the end
Not only as my lover but as my best friend
thats the poem i wrote. rate it 1-10?
2007-05-02 18:23:11 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
10
2007-05-02 18:25:41 · answer #1 · answered by amberharris20022000 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
10
2007-05-03 01:26:20 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
1 worst, 10 best?
You get a 2.3.
2007-05-03 01:26:08 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i will give u 7 marks
2007-05-03 01:29:18 · answer #4 · answered by navin_lovecool 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
uhhhh...that is just lovely =D
a 9 and 3/4
if u write it, maybe he'll come...true
2007-05-03 01:28:58 · answer #5 · answered by AtThePub 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ooh the ending was great!!!
the beginning confused me hehe..
sorry!!
but i liked it!! haha...
oh nvm the beginning was good too hehee..
i say.. 10!!
:D
2007-05-03 01:26:32 · answer #6 · answered by Melindaaa 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋