Why don't you leave before the crowd arrives?
she left early, though he told her not to.
the snake raised up its head and struck.
Rich was angry, but concealed his feelings.
2007-05-01 10:17:43 · 10 answers · asked by lilyfantasygirl08 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
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2007-05-01 10:26:11 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sentence 3...no need for the word up. Raised already gives you the information as to which direction the head would be moving.
2007-05-01 10:26:28 · answer #2 · answered by Gamma Banky 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The snake raised its head and struck.
2007-05-01 10:25:06 · answer #3 · answered by hebejebe54 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you dont need the "up" in the sentence the snake raised up its head, just let it be "the snake raised its head
2007-05-01 10:21:01 · answer #4 · answered by brown 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
'up' is redundant because the sentence already told you the snake 'raised' (meaning up).
2007-05-01 10:21:46 · answer #5 · answered by Doctor J 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
the snake raised (up) its head and struck.
2007-05-01 10:21:32 · answer #6 · answered by 8 - ßăļļ 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
the snake raised *UP* its head and struck.
2007-05-01 10:20:23 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
In the sentence with the snake "up" is superfluous.
2007-05-01 10:33:19 · answer #8 · answered by Matthew P 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
3, removing "up"
2007-05-01 10:20:25 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I would strike "one" from your question. "contains" tells me there's only one, so the "one" is itself redundant.
2007-05-01 10:26:54 · answer #10 · answered by Sgt Pepper 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋