can someone plz correct this sentence, thanks
Organisation currently opened in CBD- City of Melbourne and at the moment our aim is develop a hands-on knowledge of Internet tools useful in achieving organization's goals
2007-04-30 16:48:27 · 3 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
An organisation is open in CBD, City of Melbourne whose current aim is to develop a hands-on knowledge of the internet tools useful in achieving our goal.
2007-04-30 17:19:07 · answer #1 · answered by hebejebe54 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Organization currently opened in CBD, City of Melbourne. At the moment, our aim is to develop a hands-on knowledge of Internet Tools useful in achieving Organization goals.
2007-04-30 23:55:18 · answer #2 · answered by mrs. lady 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Mrs. Lad gave you good advice. I would only add this: substitute "currently" for the overly wordy "at the moment".
2007-05-01 00:17:04 · answer #3 · answered by Doctor J 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋