Studies on the powerful nutrients found in dark chocolate, have lead nutrition professionals to educate the public on the health benefits of including dark chocolate in their diet. In fact, registered dietitian Althea Zanecosky,
2007-04-30 14:56:52 · 7 answers · asked by supervillainguy 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
New studies show that benefitial nutrients can be found in dark chocolate. This has encouraged nutrition professionals to educate people about how dark chocolate can be good for their diet.
2007-04-30 15:00:50 · answer #1 · answered by cookiemonster 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Studies on the powerful nutrients found in dark chocolate, have lead nutrition professionals to educate the public on the health benefits of including dark chocolate in their diet. In fact, registered dietitian Althea Zanecosky,
Studies have led nutrition professionals to educate the public on the health benefits of the powerful nutrients found in dark chocolate. In fact,
2007-04-30 22:01:59 · answer #2 · answered by Steve A 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Studies have lead nutrition professionals to educate the public on the health benefits of the powerful nutrients found in dark chocolate.
2007-04-30 22:01:08 · answer #3 · answered by JerseyGirl 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
New studies are leading nutrition professionals to educate the public about the powerful nutrients found in dark chocolate.
2007-04-30 22:10:22 · answer #4 · answered by busybee 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The powerful nutrients in dark chocolate, confirmed by studies, have led nutritionists to recommend including it in a health-promoting diet.
2007-04-30 22:05:59 · answer #5 · answered by emenbensma 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
After studying the nutrients found in chocolate, nutritionists vie to gain public attention regarding its health benefits.
2007-04-30 22:06:17 · answer #6 · answered by Double O 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I don't think your first sentence is too wordy.
However, there should not be a comma before the word "have." By putting a comma there, you are setting off "Studies...chocolate" as though it is an introductory phrase; it is not -- it is the subject of the verb "have lead."
2007-04-30 22:03:46 · answer #7 · answered by cardtapper 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋