On a scale of 1-10 how sad is this poem?

Question

I wrote it and idk i need a second opinion

The Widow
A newly wed wife without a husband
Men had come for the funeral
A man had come with bad news by the name of Jusband
Her John was dead, just 2 weeks into the war
Next week the doctor was called, the widow felt odd
She was to have a baby without a dad, her heart sad 2 the core
Next week a detective was in the house
The widow was found dead with a knife in her chest
"Suicide," The detective said, "for grief of her loving spouse
The baby was dead, the wife was dead, the husband was dead
The war was alive still
With it's hands died red
4 years later a man walked into the widows old house
Nobody had bought it
He looked around for his wife, he remembered her as a little mouse
Soon after he went to the police station
He heard the story
He went outside and screamed "I hate this nation!"

i know its not that good plz don't say that its bad cuz i know it is

ok since people keep asking yes her husband did live but her comes home to find his wife and child dead also i am refering to the war in Iraq and how it is destroying families in both countrys

Answer 1

I like it. It makes you think. Nice twist at the end. I think you have good thought processes and will only improve with time. Ignore some of these other answers. They don't know just how difficult it is to write a poem. I encourage you to continue your writing, and also, why not try to get published in teen magazines? They all have addtesses for submission . Good luck, hon !! I give it a 10 !!!

Answer 2

3

Answer 3

4

Answer 4

10

Answer 5

5

Answer 6

10

Answer 7

about a 5

Answer 8

6 or 7

Answer 9

6

Answer 10

8

Answer 11

8