I suck at poetry?

Question

this is the best i could come up with:

my life is
made up agony
blood craving
insanity

Answer 1

Uhhh, pretty grim, but its not bad!

Answer 2

I'm not going to get 10 points, but what the hell...
This isn't a criticism of you, just the poem: It's terrible. It has no meaning and it doesn't make me feel anything. It is empty. It isn't a poem, it is a sentence without punctuation.
I don't know if you suck at poetry, but I can tell you've never read much of it, let alone studied it. I think you should.

Answer 3

It's really not terrible, better than a lot of what we see here, but I gotta tell you there's nothing easier than writing self-pitying prose or poetry. People tend to overly dramatize their own suffering, as if NO ONE has ever suffered like them before. Writing it therefore, beyond simply being utterly self-indulgent, tends to make for stuff that everyone who is 'suffering' can easily identify with. That makes it a LOT easier to write about than say, happiness or contentment.

Answer 4

i think i can help

'my life is made up agony
Blood craving insanity
feeling all messed up
with no one to rescue me .

Let go, and take the journey
breath and live
but my world is all a smear
the window of hope is dark.

My life is made up agony
Blood craving insanity.
all i have to do let,
Let go and take the journey.'

Answer 5

And what is wrong with that Miss Mabel?
Sounds like the start of a very deep poem to me!

Answer 6

Ummm...do you have any other hobbies?

J/K. It's OK, sounds like an emo song lyric.

Answer 7

okay.