How is this Poeming,going for a school project?

Question

Running from a world of troubles
Cause by grief that i couldn't comprehend
Begging for its misery,and change
Nothing unfortunately, went as planned

Enjoying adventures at both ends
Sandy white beach became my land
Longing to hibernate back with my fellow dolphins
Back before August stroke of mid night
From Period Bay i went

Schools became a shallow grave
With its own laws,and
Acceptance you inscribe on a dead tree

Answer 1

good

Answer 2

good...............