In addition, this key player was able to be counted on when it came down to those excruciating few minutes of a tie game, being able to pull through and score a goal to win it.
2007-04-25 14:57:33 · 5 answers · asked by Ryannn34343434 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
after "of a tie game" id take out the , and just say "and amazingly he was able to......" or something like that.
2007-04-25 15:06:18 · answer #1 · answered by Bry 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I would write it this way:
In addition, this key player was dependable when it came to those last few excrucitating minutes of a tie game: able to pull through and score a goal and win the game.
2007-04-25 22:45:09 · answer #2 · answered by Zena Baez 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
When it comes down to those excruciating few minutes of a tie game, this player could be relied on to pull through and score a winning goal.
This structure is less wordy, and follows the sequence of events you are discussing: first comes the few minutes, then comes the pulling through, then comes the goal and score......
2007-04-25 22:14:21 · answer #3 · answered by sonyack 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
how about instead of "able to be counted on" you just say he was "dependable" ? or say...
Also, this dependable player was key in those last excruciating minutes of a tie game, pulling through and scoring a winning goal.
2007-04-25 22:06:41 · answer #4 · answered by sassy222 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
In addition, this key player has to be reliable, especially at those tense, final moments of a tied game: He has to be able to pull through and score the winning goal.
2007-04-25 22:04:44 · answer #5 · answered by thisbrit 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋