Heres what i have so far... i would like to know what you think about it. .. thanks..
The clock winked eleven thirty. Kevin Donnelly closed his eyes and leaned his head back on the stiff chair in the airport office. He was starved and he’d been there for over two hours. Not counting how long he sat on the plane, sailing through the sky and above the ocean. Why couldn’t they accept his passport? He’d been an American for his whole life, born and raised in the streets of Brooklyn. But now he was in London, to live with his older brother. Why now? He sighed and sauntered over to the door. He pressed the handle in. He wasn’t waiting here in a damn airport all day. He had a life to live. But then he realized he was in a foreign country with nowhere to go, and decided to sit back down.
A tall man with short but shaggy hair black hair and clear green eyes walked into the lobby, just outside the office. The man had the same untidy hair and brilliant green eyes as Kevin. He walked to the door and knocked, Tom, the man in charge of the passports and immigration opened the door and the man walked in.
“Nice to see you Alex,” said Tom, shuffling papers on his desk, “I’ll be damned, your brother looks a whole lot like you.”
Alex grinned, he was proud of his good-looks. “So what do I have to sign?” he added, looking out the door to the room where Kevin was sitting. He could see that black hair. Tom pulled out up a release paper, and handed it to Joe, who quickly read through it and signed his name at the bottom.
“That’ll do it. The kid’s in the next room.” Alex nodded and opened the door.
Kevin’s voice cracked as he said barely above a whisper, “Alex?” Kevin stood up and wrapped his arms around him, his oldest brother.
It had been a year and a half since Alex had seen his youngest brother, and boy, was he was glad to see him now. Alex rubbed the top of Kevin’s head, “I swear Kevin! You’re getting so tall, and what, your 14 now? Geez, I’m getting old.” Kevin snickered, Alex was only 22. Nevertheless, that was his brother, always teasing him, and he was so pleased to see him.
Kevin & Alex’s two brothers were both killed in the car wreck that killed their parents. Shaun and Jimmy. Shaun was just 16 and Jimmy 18 when a drunk in a semi ran a red light. Their mom, dad, and Jimmy were killed on impact. Shaun lived for a week afterwards. He was brain dead so there wasn’t anything they could do. They both remembered the day of the funerals. One a few days after the crash, and then Shaun’s less than 10 days later. What a shock that had.
Alex had moved to London just a few months after the funerals. He said it was for work but Kevin wasn’t so sure. In the meantime, Kevin had been shoved around with aunts and uncles, cousins and grandparents. After awhile they got tired of him and finally shipped him off to live with Alex.
2007-04-25
13:11:44
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2007-04-25
13:27:26 ·
update #1