Winter's here,
Fires blaze, causing a shadowy effect.
A mug of hot soup,
(Careful, I don't want to droop)
Dew drips off the spring morning plants,
While the birds sing in the sky.
Children laughing at the corner,
Bikes go speeding by
Dogs barking in the night,
The moon shining bright.
Sounds of spring ring in my ears
Summers here, yippee! No school for me!
Swimming in the pool, splashing all the while.
It's short. I thought it would be fun using a few seasons.
2007-04-24 03:43:21 · 9 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
I did the 'drooping' b/c I couldn't think of anything else to write for it. I meant it to mean 'careful, I don't want to fall asleep'. I didn't think that would really rhyme.
2007-04-24 03:45:20 · update #1
http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=AjuvowFDwLSGWHx2qcKn7zOIxQt.?qid=20070424072434AAyKDAE
2007-04-24 03:59:35 · update #2
I wrote it just now.
2007-04-24 03:59:57 · update #3
pretty good
2007-04-24 03:47:12 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
A star is born!
2007-04-26 17:38:35 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Beautiful! Such elegance and charm in writing, my love!
2007-04-24 03:45:59 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 2⤋
yea Queen I liked it
2007-04-24 03:46:54 · answer #4 · answered by Peggy C 4 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Love it. But don't forget autumn, it's my favorite.
2007-04-24 03:50:24 · answer #5 · answered by FLORIDA MOM 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Very good.
When did you write that?
Aaron
2007-04-24 03:46:27 · answer #6 · answered by Players 5 · 1⤊ 2⤋
I like it.
2007-04-24 03:47:30 · answer #7 · answered by chmar11 6 · 1⤊ 1⤋
yeah i like it
2007-04-24 03:45:58 · answer #8 · answered by Mag 7 · 1⤊ 2⤋
Its not bad :)
2007-04-24 03:46:47 · answer #9 · answered by SEXY EVERTONIAN 5 · 1⤊ 1⤋