Should I do this?

Question

I'm sending out rent notices that say:

"A friendly reminder that rent is due. You owe ($$) that is to be paid by April 30, 2007. If unable to pay by the date listed, please contact Jennifer at (phone number) before the due date to make payment arrangements."

I really really want to put "OR ELSE" at the bottom..

It' the same notice my boss has me send out every month. I just want to add a little something extra with love.

Answer 1

HA! I think the way you have it is OK.

Answer 2

Send them a picture of a horses head, remind them of The Godfather. That'll get the rent paid.

Answer 3

well you can I guess, does the lease specify the day the rent is due and is there a grace period or late fees, it really should be spelled out in the lease dear

Answer 4

Put or else I will be forced to contact the authorities. And then place some crack in the place to set them up : ) Good Luck

Answer 5

How about an additional paragraph that says:

Please act promptly in this matter as failure to do so will result in further action being taken.

Answer 6

If I got that notice I would laugh my azz off.
By the way. I didn't catch that phone #.

Answer 7

well i would. but im evil like that. if people owe me money i want it now or else.

Answer 8

I like Jon's idea

Answer 9

Yes, put 'or else I'll fart in your general direction'

Answer 10

you could put or eviction proceedings will begin at your cost.