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Today in our society, number of the serious crimes such as murder and rape have increased drssticaly. More than one thousand of people die each year ,because of the crimes that has been commiteed by young teenagers. Likewise, recent laws make it possible to punish as adults young teenagers who commit crimes serious crimes such as murder and rape. however, young teenagers should not be forced to spend their young lives in jail.
First of all, young teenagers are unaware of the crime the seriousness crimes they commit. Most of the young teenagers go to the party in the middle of nigth. They drink alcholic beverages which make them unconcious of the crimes. Similarly they use drugs and after they don't know what they do. Clearly, they are unbalanced. In addition, media and game is influence to the young teenagers. most of the young teenagers wacth and learn such violences througth TV. Most of their time they spend watching TV. Moreover, they play games and learn violence from the

2007-04-23 15:53:21 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference Homework Help

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Recently, there has been a drastic increase in the number of serious crimes such as murder and rape. More than one thousand people die each year because of these crimes that has been committed by mostly young teenagers.

As a result, recent laws have made it possible to punish young teenagers as adults who commit these said crimes. However, these young teenagers should not be forced to spend their young lives in jail. Firstly, because these young teenagers are unaware of the seriousness of the crimes that they commit. Most of them go to parties in the middle of night and drink alcoholic beverages which make them unaware of their actions.

Additionally, they use illegal drugs and afterwards they don't know what they have done. Clearly, they are unbalanced an needs some type of physiological help. Moreover, the media and games are an influence on the teenagers since most of them are see these violent scenes played out on the television. Most of their time is spent watching TV instead of doing something constructive.

2007-04-23 16:16:21 · answer #1 · answered by Highly Favoured 7 · 0 0

In today's society, the number of the serious crimes such as murder and rape have increased drastically. More than one thousand people die each year because of the crimes that has been committed by young teenagers. Likewise, recent laws make it possible to punish as young teens as adults,who commit crimes serious crimes.However, young teenagers should not be forced to spend their young lives in jail.
Firstly, young teenagers are unaware of the seriousness of the crimes they commit. Most of the young teenagers go to the parties in the middle of the night, where they engage in activities such drinking alcohol which make them less concious of the crimes they committ. Similarly, they use drugs and usually can't remember what they did while on the the different substances. Clearly, they often misjudge different situations because of abuse of drugs and alcohol. In addition, media and gaming can influence the youngsters to do what they feel as "cool", and "acceptable". Most of the teens watch and learn violence through televison, movies, and other media such as video games. In fact, young teens spend a bulk of their time they spend watching T.V. which can have a negative impact on their minds and they play games and learn violence from the graphic video games that are popular and readily availiable to teens today.

2007-04-23 23:12:42 · answer #2 · answered by fgfggfgfg 2 · 0 0

Today in our society, the number of serious crimes such as murder and rape have increased drastically. More than one thousand of people die each year, from crimes that have been committed by young teenagers. Similarly, recent laws have made it possible to punish young teenagers who commit serious crimes such as murder and rape as adults. Nevertheless, many of those young teenagers should not be forced to spend their entire young lives in jail.

First of all, young teenagers are often unaware of the crime the seriousness crimes they commit. Some young teenagers go to parties in the middle of night. They drink alcoholic beverages, and then they don't remember their crimes. Sometimes they use drugs and after wards they have no idea what they are doing. Clearly, they are unbalanced. In Additionally, media like TV and video games are a bad influence on them. They watch and learn violence during hours they spend every day watching TV. Moreover, they play games and learn violence from the ......(you got cut off there)

2007-04-23 23:08:34 · answer #3 · answered by Zelda Hunter 7 · 0 0

In today's society,the number of serious crimes such as murder and rape have increased drastically.More than one thousand people die every year because of these crimes comitted by youngsters.Though recent laws have made possible to punish these youngsters the same way as any adult,they should not be forced to spend their young lives in jail.
First of all,youngsters of the crimes they commit.Most of the youngsters go to the party in the mid-night.They drink alcoholic beverages,take drugs that make them unconscious of the crimes that they commit.In addition,youngsters are influenced by media which is a source from where they watch and learn such violence.
Most of the time is spent in watching tv.

2007-04-24 04:45:44 · answer #4 · answered by swats 2 · 0 0

You have spelling, capitalization, punctuation and grammar errors, but the real problem is that you appear to be making up the facts as you type. You are also using your personal opinions as fact.
1. Murder rates in this country are actually down in some states.
2. Laws that allow young teens to be tried as adults vary widely by state.
3. It is illogical to say "most young teenagers" do anything. How many young teenagers? Which ones? How are young teenagers getting to parties in the middle of the night? Saying young teens implies they are too young to drive.
4. You say the teens are committing crimes while they are unconscious, a physical impossibility.
5. You imply that "most" teens also abuse drugs, and spend the rest of their time watching TV and playing violent video games.
You need to do some research and get your facts straight and cite your sources in the essay or in footnotes. If you are writing an opinion essay, you need to say so in the copy.

2007-04-23 23:15:16 · answer #5 · answered by smallbizperson 7 · 0 0

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