You capture my heart
When I just hear you laugh
And though we are young
You're my missing half
When you're playing with children
And showing them love
You make my heart beat
Like your sent from above
You capture my heart
With your captivating beauty
And inspire me to make
Caring for you my duty
When you're walking, you move
With such style and grace
And I could study all day
Every line of your face
I'll search high and low
Until each other we find
But now for today
You exist in my mind
I'll learn your inner beauty
On the net when we chat
And know as you type
That my heart's where you're at
When we are apart
It's you I will miss
And long once again
To taste your sweet kiss
I'll embrace you so close
Each night and each day
But for now I will search
Till I find you .................Someday
2007-04-19 03:20:52 · 28 answers · asked by dwsum41@yahoo.com 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
aww that is sooo beautiful. i like it
2007-04-19 03:23:11 · answer #1 · answered by sarahxhardcore 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
How romantic.
I love your choice of words and the ability to capture the insight of beauty without using profanity, demeaning terms and inferences.
The young lady that captures your heart is truely lucky!
Kudos!
2007-04-19 10:26:03 · answer #2 · answered by Ms. V 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
What's good but yeah I felt that way before so don't let your love slip away from tha person you really care about you fell me?But you keep doing what you do sweetie let her know how you fell.If that means that you keep writting poems 2 her expressing your LOVE 2 her then she will be like DAMN he/she really do LOve me like they say they really do u know?
But yeah like i said just keep doing what you need 2 do 2 get her
2007-04-19 10:53:28 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Awww oh my gosh, i think my heart just melted. That is just soo sweet, the girl you wrote this for is very lucky indeed and im sure she will love it. Great job, you are very talented. :)
2007-04-19 10:25:45 · answer #4 · answered by Jaded 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is really good. I would put it in a scrap book so you can have it for the rest of your life.
2007-04-19 10:28:12 · answer #5 · answered by misty blue 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Aw, you've made me the happiest girl in the world!
2007-04-19 17:08:42 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Someone on here has the exact same ending...3 times!!!!
2007-04-19 10:24:12 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
She is very lucky!! it is not everyday that you meet a guy with sweet emotions like that... keep writing :))
2007-04-19 10:32:02 · answer #8 · answered by gone 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats awsum, - aren't u the leader singer of sum 41? (dw - deryck whilby?????) if u r, - i luv ur band n cant w8 for the new album!
2007-04-22 12:30:34 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Marry me
2007-04-19 10:24:17 · answer #10 · answered by ♥Sparkling♥Jules♥ 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
aww...thats a sweet poem. almost as good as the text messages i get from my bf
2007-04-19 10:24:08 · answer #11 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋