I adore you I live for you I love you baby cause you treat me right you hold me tight and i'll never let you get away from me..... I crave you wonna save you from the hurt and the pain in this world wonna intice boy I invite you into my heart for always.........(there's more but what do ya think so far?)
2007-04-17 02:53:40 · 5 answers · asked by No 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
I love it! Want to hear the rest of it when you finish it!
2007-04-17 08:10:59 · answer #1 · answered by G.W. loves winter! 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I had a problem with the "wonna intice" part. Love the premise though.
You deserve to see one of mine:
Guarantee - Your Uncle Dodge (Laughing Dolphin Music) lyrics
Am I not trying to be a fool,
Or am I a fool for not trying?
Feeling so desperate, love’s dirty jewel
So deep I just can’t start crying
If there was a guarantee that down the road there’s you and me
You know I’d take it
Can we save what love we have?
Can we have what love we save?
Can we just stop the world and laugh,
Preventing love’s early grave?
If there was a solid sign that we shall stand the test of time
You know I’d take it
If there were signals from above saying that all is fair in love
You know I’d take it
After all the love you’ve shown,
A higher place I’ve never known.
Can we reap what seeds we’ve sown?
I’m set on making our love right
What are the stakes, what is the cost?
I’m unable to sleep tonight
Two lifetimes of love could be lost
If there was a guarantee that down the road there’s you and me
You know I’d take it
You know I’d take it
You know I will!
2007-04-17 10:00:49 · answer #2 · answered by Your Uncle Dodge! 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Just by reading the words and not hearing the tune, I think the lyrics are really simple and cliche.
2007-04-17 09:59:58 · answer #3 · answered by shih rips 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's ok, but you no it's pretty good for a start. Keep up the good Work!
2007-04-17 09:59:55 · answer #4 · answered by xxSTEPHiEE_ 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
good...can be better...
2007-04-17 10:08:44 · answer #5 · answered by brokenheart89 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋