Anyone who is kind to help me with my grammar problems with these 3 sentences?

Question

1.He woke up again in the hospital finding out that both of his legs were amputated.

2.The next night a teenage girl is tired after two Police officers chased her.

3.. She saw the old church as a place where she can hide and feel safe.

Answer 1

1. He woke up in the hospital and found out that both of his legs had been amputated.

2. The teenaged girl was tired after being chased by two police officers the night before.

3. She saw the old church as a place where she feels it's safe to hide.

Answer 2

1. He woke up in the hospital again to find that both of his legs had been amputated.

2. The next night, the teenaged girl was tired after being chased by two police officers.

3. She saw the church as a place where she could hide and feel safe.

Answer 3

1.He woke up again, to find that both his legs had been amputated.
2. The night after two Police Officers chased her, the teenage girl is tired.
3. This sentence appears to be fine, except that perhaps you might use 'could' instead of 'can'.