Please check whether this sentence is right or not?

Question

Woman1: According to this article, most of young people define success as being famous.
Woman2: That is so sad.
Woman1: Shouldn't we think those are famous such as doctors who take care of the sick or scientist to invent new technology?
Woman 2: Do you know what thing do they have in common?
Woman1: What is that?
Woman2: Concentrate on one thing.
Woman1: You really do too . Man !

Please see this writing is strange or not. cause I am not a native speaker.

Answer 1

Woman1: According to this article, most of young people define success as being famous.
According to this article, most young people define success as being famous.

Woman1: Shouldn't we think those are famous such as doctors who take care of the sick or scientist to invent new technology
Shouldn't we think doctors who take care of the sick or scientist to invent new technology should be famous?

Woman 2: Do you know what thing do they have in common?
Do you know what one thing they have in common?

The last two sentences do not seem to have any relevancy to the dialogue so I've left them alone.

Answer 2

Woman1: According to this article, most young people define success as being famous.
Woman2: That is so sad.
Woman1: Shouldn't we think people such as doctors, who take care of the sick, or scientists, who invent new technology are successful?
Woman 2: Do you know what thing they have in common?
Woman1: What is that?
Woman2: Concentrate on one thing.
Woman1: You really do, too. Man!

---I don't understand the last two lines. :(

Answer 3

Here is how I would rewrite your dialog, trying not to change too much, but making it as clear as possible to the reader:

Woman1: According to this article, most young people define success as being famous.
Woman2: That is so sad.
Woman1: Shouldn't we think of doctors who take care of the sick or scientists who invent new technology as being successful?
Woman2: Do you know what they have in common?
Woman1: What is that?
Woman2: They focus very hard on one thing.
Woman1: You're right! Wow!

***Like some of the other answerers, I think you need to give us some background information about what you're trying to do here. It would make the answers much more accurate if you would tell us why you're writing this dialog and what you are trying to say with it.

Answer 4

W1 "According to this article, most young people define success as being famous" (Good sentence)

W2 "That is so sad"(Informal but ok)

W1 "Why?. Dont 'famous" people include doctors who take care of the sick and scientists who invent new technology?"

W2 " Do you know what famous people have in common?"

W1 "What is that?"

Now the last two sentences do not make sense "concentrate on one thing" and "You really do too, man"

Replace them with:

W2 "Famous people are so focused and concentrate on being successful"

W1 " Hey, you can do that too, man!"

Answer 5

according to this article most young people define success as being famous
tat is really sad
it is not necessary for a person to be either a doctor who takes care of the sick or a scientist who invents new technologies in order to be famous .
do u kno one thing wat scientists and doctors have in common
wat is tat
they concentrate and focus on whatever they do
u really cud do tat too. nt necessary oly doctors and scientists are capable of doing tat.any man can do tat

Answer 6

Oh, I suppose I could nitpick through your sentence(s) and find mistakes, put a comma in here or there, but I guess if you focus on the last line, that is the one that is crucial and needs work. As it stands, it makes no sense.

Answer 7

no longer all issues bypass precisely as you pick them to, yet once you have somebody who makes you smile, no longer the rest concerns! As for the extra question- if I pronounced "each thing else does no longer remember" that could mean that by some skill i've got already concept approximately each thing and function long gone to choose that it does no longer remember...while "no longer the rest concerns" could be that regardless of what that's i does no longer take it sluggish to think of of it because of the fact that's not significant. subsequently asserting no longer the rest remember conveys the belief extra totally than the 1st.

Answer 8

Yeah,,,it's right gurl!Good job...Neway,keep on looking for the definitions of success in other points of view. And u'll discover what success really is.

Answer 9

Which sentence?