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Yesterday, when I was very stressed out, I can relax, thank you.

2007-04-16 17:25:17 · answer #1 · answered by hat10trick 2 · 0 0

2nd seriously, the teacher made us, i mean i look to the sky every now and then but not lay down just to look at clouds

2007-04-16 17:23:25 · answer #2 · answered by adam48122 1 · 0 0

hi Wurrble : ) nicely, it does not make you elect to examine extra. If that's your first financial ruin - and it form of appears like this is, you may desire to start with the hero/heroine. who's e book (tale) is it? Zac's or Sarah's? who're we going to maintain on with while they area? this is significant on your 1st financial ruin to hook your readers. you elect to get them in touch on your hero's existence. a reliable thank you to try this's to start with a disaster that ends up in a foul determination on your hero's area OR a foul determination that ends up in a disaster. perchance beginning your tale with the fireplace and the orphanage burning - or perchance slightly earlier that with the undesirable determination that starts the fireplace??? yet this interesting start up we could your reader come to a decision to bypass on the journey alongside with your hero and change the internet site to work out what happens next. this could be a scene for the midsection of your e book. Early on, you're saying there is tight privateness above them from the timber' cover then that Zac can see the celebrities - choose - is the sky open above or hidden via the treetops? Then there is what's spoke of as an "records unload" once you "tell" with regard to the orphanage - you're desirous to "tell" us their history. we would desire to constantly get to appreciate those characters little at a time - in simple terms like once you meet somebody, you do no longer understand all their history at as quickly as. this is reliable so you might appreciate the characters' back memories, yet while there is an component of it relatively pertinent to the tale, enable readers discover out because of the fact the tale unfolds - tutor do no longer tell is a few thing you will pay attention plenty in case you may desire to discover a writers workshop to connect. I noticeably propose that - verify on line for writers communities on your area. reward Grami

2016-11-25 00:14:30 · answer #3 · answered by ? 4 · 0 0

Not since I was a child... life is too fast-paced here, and more importantly, it's difficult to find a nice, clean patch of grass to do so - towering apartment blocks or office buildings everywhere! :(

2007-04-16 18:02:18 · answer #4 · answered by july_exodus 3 · 0 0

That is some time ago, late last summer, about august, but it was very relaxing.

2007-04-16 17:25:57 · answer #5 · answered by Kaj V 3 · 0 0

20 years ago

2007-04-16 18:15:18 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

Yesterday while I was driving home from school.

I'm in traction now, but they were pretty.

2007-04-16 17:25:05 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

i'd rather lay down and watch the stars and the moon.

2007-04-16 17:23:14 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0 2

This morning

2007-04-16 17:23:55 · answer #9 · answered by SidBridge 6 · 0 0

last summer with my son

2007-04-16 17:23:30 · answer #10 · answered by The French Connection 6 · 0 0

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