What do you think of this poem??? (for memorial day)?

Question

I'm not finished yet and don't think it's that good. What do you think?
Remember the Soldiers

Remember the soldiers who died for us
Who fought in every war
On this day commemorate
With all of the pictures we create

Remember the soldiers who fought for us
From prairies to the ocean floor
We remember always
From the deserts to the ocean bays

Remember the soldiers who are there for us
As our bright flags soar
They made our home calm and free
From every tree to every bee

k this is all of it... still not sure i like it though

Remember the Soldiers

Remember the soldiers who died for us
Who fought in every war
On this day commemorate
With all of the pictures we create

Remember the soldiers who fought for us
From prairies to the ocean floor
We remember always
From the deserts to the ocean bays

Remember the soldiers who are there for us
As our bright flags soar
They made our home calm and free
From every tree to every bee

Remember the soldiers always
And through history we explore
Originally “Decoration Day”
Changed to “Memorial Day”

Remember the soldiers every day
They fought in every war
Open up your memories
With celebration and ceremonies

Answer 1

im not much of a poam writer but i think its good