The Field of Rye
Gather 'round
And you will hear
About this field of rye.
Secrets lie
In this field of rye.
Many you haven't heard.
No birds fly
Over this field of rye.
No trees grow
No animals roam
In this field of rye.
No voices escape from this field of rye.
For no man has dared to enter.
Your fate is the same as mine.
Prepare to disappear.
--
Not the best poem in the world... Kind of creepy. I'm really getting in to writing darker things. I'm writing a story to go with my 'Alice in Wonderland Syndrome' one, too. :)
2007-04-15 17:01:36 · 8 answers · asked by Illusen ♫ 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
I like it :-)
2007-04-15 17:04:54 · answer #1 · answered by beatlesfanatic123456 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Cool! I'm impressed with your piece of literature. Keep writing pieces. Is E.A. Poe your inspiration for writing dark poetry? Just wondering. Peace!
2007-04-15 17:08:10 · answer #2 · answered by Drivliam 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow that is great, keep up the good work.
2007-04-15 17:08:42 · answer #3 · answered by John 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It works for me.
2007-04-15 17:13:19 · answer #4 · answered by oatie 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice =)
2007-04-15 17:06:54 · answer #5 · answered by icanhelp 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
well written but creepy...
2007-04-15 17:07:18 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
well-written
2007-04-15 17:05:01 · answer #7 · answered by Mag 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Bravo =) good poem there and yesh please post more =)
2007-04-15 17:05:27 · answer #8 · answered by rayda1009 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋