If I brought to you a rainbow
would you take it from my hands,
would it become a treasure
that would ease your curt demands?
If I captured you a moonbeam
and offered it with love,
would you at last be satisfied
and feel you have enough?
If I offered you the heavens
and all that they entail,
would you smile at me and thank me
or would your love for me still fail?
If I wove for you a future
from the purest love Divine,
would that be all you'd need from me
would you, at last be mine?
Or am I just living in a dream
of some dim and faded fantasy,
For all I really have to give
is this old heart inside of me
2007-04-15 15:55:25 · 5 answers · asked by lee 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Philosophy
you did really good until the last phrases, starting at=- or am i just its beautiful, and it flows well, it's has good balance until the last phrase.
2007-04-15 16:11:44 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I wanted to help intercept, but it was too flighty and got away like a dream and a rainbow. I guess I need a faster interceptor.
2007-04-15 16:02:15 · answer #2 · answered by Mike1942f 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Do you mean "interpret" the poem?
If that's what you mean, then I think it means that the woman is never satisfied, always wanting more.
2007-04-15 16:41:50 · answer #3 · answered by whatever22 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
im not sure what you mean?
I think it means the woman is never happy,,but i have read the poem somewhere before i think..
2007-04-15 16:04:03 · answer #4 · answered by heartzz_ablaze 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Do you want to intercept it? Or interpret it?
2007-04-15 16:44:45 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋