Both ways are correct, and there are something to be said for both of them.
The way you suggested, "... a vast number of persons who have no qualifications for it adopt it," is certainly correct and has the advantage of placing the modifying phrase, "who have no qualifications for it," next to the word "persons," which it modifies. That sentence structure is perfectly grammatical.
But the other way you quoted, " ... a vast number of persons adopt it who have no qualifications for it," is also correct, and it has the advantage of placing the verb (adopt) immediately after the subject (persons). This is the more common structure in English. Postponing the verb until the end of a sentence, as in "... a vast number of persons who have no ...." requires the reader to hold the first part of the sentence in memory, waiting till he gets to the end of the modifying phrase before he finds out what the action is.
I prefer putting the subject and verb close together.
The sentence structure in which they are separated, with the verb near the end of the sentence, is more like German sentence structure than English usage. Mark Twain remarked that German sentences were like diving into the Atlantic and coming up on the other side with a verb in your mouth.
It may be only a matter of preference, but I think typical readers are impatient to learn what the action is, as soon as you have named the actor; and that the action is more important than the phrase modifying the actor.
In support of that remark, note that the modifying phrase could be omitted from the sentence, but not the verb. That is, the sentence would still be meaningful if we said, " It is such a pleasant profession that it is not surprising that a vast number of persons adopt it"; however, we could not omit "adopt" or "adopt it" and still have a meaningful statement.
2007-04-15 18:08:39
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answered by yahoohoo 6
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Okay, look at it this way.
First, ignore the second appearance of the word "that" and everything before it.
Overlooking the fact that you don't know what "it" is, you have a complete sentence, "A vast number of persons adopt it who have no qualifications for it."
So now look at just the part you ignored. "It is so pleasant a profession that it is not surprising that...."
This part is saying that "it" is a pleasant profession, and tells you it is about to give an example of how pleasant it is, and that's what the first part we looked at is.
A way to rewrite the sentence is "Writing is a nice job because you don't have to know what you're doing."
2007-04-15 15:50:35
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answered by open4one 7
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The sentence itself means that writing as a profession is something anyone can do, and it doesn't surprise the person writing this sentence that a lot of people "adopt" or take on this profession of writing. He also claims that most of the people who write really are not qualified to do so.
2007-04-15 15:52:09
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answered by ? 2
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It means that writing is such a pleasant profession that it is no wonder why so many people try to do it even though they are not qualified . They are not good writers but they like the profession ( writing )
the sentence is just a play on words. It is like saying cooking is such a pleasant profession that is not surprising how many people claim they are good cooks even if they are not.
2007-04-15 16:20:38
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answered by Samantha 2
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maximum of those solutions are solid and precise so a techniques as they circulate. The universe is in a relentless state of "exchange". consequently they think of it desires a relentless theory to reserve its nature. in actuality, no person knows lots greater effective than that for the time of regards to the universe. It does seem to be increasing like that of blowing air right into a balloon by fact the finest analogy. It additionally consequently stands to reason that if the universe is increasing, the place or whilst will it quit increasing and what's going to take place at that element. Will it opposite and start to deflate (which you will talk) or will it in simple terms circulate BANG such as you in simple terms popped that balloon. no person knows. So "The dynamic nature of the universe demands an ordering theory". Is so we mere human beings can placed the full element right into somewhat basket to objective and comprehend, that that may not be understood, no count how lots is common approximately it, as there'll continuously be something new we did no longer comprehend. The fact it self is fake as we will not placed an ordered theory to that which we will not in any respect comprehend totally. approximately all that we are able to declare is barely that which we expect of all of us comprehend approximately it.
2016-12-29 15:05:05
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answered by ? 4
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Ok, let me try to rewrite the sentence in simpler English.
"I am a writer. It is such a pleasant job that it is not surprising that a lot of people who are unable to write choose to do it."
Or like this "I am a writer. Writing is a pleasant job. So it is not surprising that many people who cannot write try to do it"
2007-04-15 16:58:01
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answered by yello 1
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You are right, it should be "persons who have no qualifications for it adopt it "
2007-04-15 15:49:38
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answered by Anonymous
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'who have no qualifications for it'.
Means that this person isn't the right person for the job.
2007-04-15 15:44:56
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answered by Rob 5
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it is so nice being a writer that I understand why many people do it who in fact are not qualified to do it
2007-04-15 15:54:53
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answered by Anonymous
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