In this story a sorceress casts a spell on the goblins who live on planet Uba-Delta. The goblins kill elfs,dwarfs,and anyone they can kill until the sorceress gets to the Emperor and the Emperoress so they can steal the amulet of Life which in turn can lead to the destruction of Uba-Delta. The elfs and other magical creatures seek help from an unwitting Human who doesn’t belive in what they tell him/her.
this is copyrighted. i would just like to know what you guys think of the story line or should i change it or any ideas...anything.
2007-04-15 09:16:34 · 5 answers · asked by Tasia 1 in Society & Culture ➔ Mythology & Folklore
Damn. It's too bad that's copyrighted, because I'm tempted to steal your idea!
Edit: On second thought, I'm not going to joke around.
Your idea is terrible. It's not copyrightable. It's not even a real idea. It's just a poorly written mishmash of fantasy genre cliches.
However, don't let that stop you from writing it.
You should never ask questions like this.
Think about it: You're asking what people think of your idea BEFORE IT'S EVEN AN IDEA. How are you ever going to write anything that way?
Think about all the things you liked last year that you don't like today. Maybe you liked a videogame that you now think is boring. Maybe you got sick of certain types of books or food. Your likes and dislikes are constantly changing, and that includes the types of stories you like to write. Six months to a year from now, whatever it was you liked about this idea is going to seem stupid to you. That's why you need to write it now. No matter what your idea is, it's going to seem stupid in a year, so write it as soon as you think of it.
If you can write seven terrible novels, you will have seven times the experience of most novelists.
Just write. Don't ask anybody's permission.
You can and should show your work to others when you're done, but don't expect it to be great. Write for the enjoyment of the process and for the learning experience. If you keep at it, one day, when you do have a great idea, you'll have the hard-gained knowledge to translate that idea into a good story.
2007-04-15 09:38:56 · answer #1 · answered by Sabrina H 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it kinda umm sucks no offense but i wouldn't buy the book or even read it unless someone i knew recommended it or lots of people did defiantly change it.
take out who live on uba-delta we will read that in the story.
this The goblins kill elfs,dwarfs,and anyone they can kill until the sorceress gets to the Emperor and the Emperoress so they can steal the amulet of Life which in turn can lead to the destruction of Uba-Delta just doesn't make a whole lot of sense
the last part is good though
2007-04-15 09:25:21 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
1. Why should a human be the one who saves the day?! (so that part is really lame!)
2. Why an amulet of life? Can't you be more creative?!
3. I feel like I already heard it somewhere before...
BORING! UNCREATIVE!
I wouldn't read it!
2007-04-15 10:54:46 · answer #3 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it but some of the wording is very "heavy" and complicated. Try adding some lighter sentences in between some of your stuff you have here.
I think it's great so far.
Good luck! :)
2007-04-15 09:24:26 · answer #4 · answered by laneybeans 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
sound great to me
2007-04-15 10:14:16 · answer #5 · answered by Linda 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋