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Which one is better?

I am struggling with the word "both" in the sentence? Should I add the word, "both?"

If you have a better suggestion to make the sentence better, please feel free to write back.
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Even though SROs and SOX both require independent committee members, SROs can establish much stricter rules than SOX can. The goal of SRO is to enhance the quality of corporate governance by requiring additional rules for listed companies.

Even though SROs and SOX require independent committee members, SROs can establish much stricter rules than SOX can. The goal of SRO is to enhance the quality of corporate governance by requiring additional rules for listed companies.
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2007-04-14 18:44:19 · 11 answers · asked by Kaede R 1 in Education & Reference Homework Help

11 answers

try "each"?

Even though SROs and SOX each require independent committee members, SROs can establish...

2007-04-14 18:49:15 · answer #1 · answered by pink.poodlepuppies 1 · 1 0

Yes, since you are comparing two things: once to note agreement and once to note a discrepancy, you need "both" to make this clear. I also wonder whether your third mention of SRO should have an "S" or if not, whether it should take an article. I also don't think "requiring" is quite right here. Perhaps you could rethink it.

2007-04-15 01:52:57 · answer #2 · answered by Bethany 7 · 0 0

yes, add the word both..

BUT.. add it like this:

"Even though both SROs and SOX require independent committee members....."

2007-04-15 01:54:28 · answer #3 · answered by whome? 4 · 0 0

no it is not necessary so the second one sounds better and you are also implying both because of your verb usage of the word "require."

2007-04-15 03:38:43 · answer #4 · answered by Dave aka Spider Monkey 7 · 0 0

I'd say keep the "both" if you feel that extra emphasis is needed.

2007-04-15 07:57:43 · answer #5 · answered by daydreamerz43 1 · 0 0

Either way works, but I prefer you to use "both."

2007-04-15 01:47:31 · answer #6 · answered by Moohlah. 2 · 0 0

Yes, use the word "both."

2007-04-15 01:47:19 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

I think you should change "both" to "each"

2007-04-15 01:52:18 · answer #8 · answered by shaggy_g 3 · 0 0

i say add the "both" for clarity...

2007-04-15 01:46:55 · answer #9 · answered by ? 2 · 0 0

No

2007-04-15 02:58:30 · answer #10 · answered by Kinshuk 2 · 0 0

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