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Beautiful in your eyes? how to respond to such a seemingly innocent lie, though, I'm sure you meant well, it's true, 'some of us do prefer illusion to despair', unfortunately I'm not one of them, not easily tricked or drawn in, of course it's a line and there are hooks in it. Stupid boys make fairly amusing toys, bendable, pose-able, completely disposable, weak and excitable, fully exploitable, unnumbered fools have fallen. Or, wait did I say that, how did that slip through the edit, idealistic interns think they can change the whole world, what I mean to say is thanks I know, greek scupture... but nothing compaired to you.

2007-04-14 08:14:21 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities Books & Authors

5 answers

This was good. The lines need to be aligned into stanzas. Watch out for capitalization and punctuation, like delete ? after eyes.

2007-04-14 11:20:49 · answer #1 · answered by Kristen H 6 · 1 1

Very nice Pruf ... I give this a 9 - Do I DARE disturb the universe? Pax - C.

2007-04-14 08:21:37 · answer #2 · answered by Persiphone_Hellecat 7 · 1 1

I really like it...it made me feel calm, happy, and wanting to love someone. Props to you.

2007-04-14 08:19:30 · answer #3 · answered by freelikesilk 2 · 1 0

Yeah !

2007-04-14 08:22:14 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0 1

gold star.

2007-04-14 08:19:54 · answer #5 · answered by robert j 2 · 0 1

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