You capture my heart
When I just hear you laugh
And though we are young
You're my missing half
When you're playing with children
And showing them love
You make my heart beat
Like your sent from above
You capture my heart
With your captivating beauty
And inspire me to make
Caring for you my duty
When you're walking, you move
With such style and grace
And I could study all day
Every line of your face
I'll search high and low
Until each other we find
But now for today
You exist in my mind
I'll learn your inner beauty
On the net when we chat
And know as you type
That my heart's where you're at
When we are apart
It's you I will miss
And long once again
To taste your sweet kiss
I'll embrace you so close
Each night and each day
But for now I will search
Till I find you .................Someday
2007-04-13 08:23:00 · 48 answers · asked by dwsum41@yahoo.com 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
That's very sweet... When you find "her", "she" will love it.
2007-04-13 08:27:15 · answer #1 · answered by SchrodingersTigress 5 · 2⤊ 1⤋
Beautiful.
2007-04-13 08:26:16 · answer #2 · answered by Semi-charmed 4 · 3⤊ 1⤋
I think it is really beautiful! Now days it is hard to find a man that can actually write a poem..or even anything nice!:( Is that for a special woman? If so, send it to her!
2007-04-13 08:29:16 · answer #3 · answered by ♥BINK♥ 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I liked it until "On the net when we chat.." The idea that you haven't found that person yet, that they are in your dreams is great. But I don't like the net part..it just seems off somehow.
2007-04-13 08:30:26 · answer #4 · answered by Laurel 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
oh my Gosh, ur the most romantic guy I've ever seen!! all the guys in my school are..
1. perverts
2. rude
3.basterds
4.not even a bit romantic！
that girl is so luck, I wish it was me, hey.. are u hott?
2007-04-13 08:32:01 · answer #5 · answered by Maria love Aaron 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋
it is Sweet but who is it to. Why did you write it? it is beautiful but i need a better understanding before i can make a worthy comment to please your high poem stature!. you shouldnt say on the net. it generally makes people uncomfortable. whoever that is for is one lucky girl.Nice job
2007-04-13 14:01:25 · answer #6 · answered by Raking S 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
one of my first boyfriends was all mushy and sentimental, which seems romantic when you're so young... but then they turn out to be gay like 95% of the time. you'll make some guy very happy some day, meanwhile i'm sure you make the tween girls swoon.
2007-04-13 08:28:20 · answer #7 · answered by Bored Enough To Be Here 6 · 0⤊ 2⤋
That was very pleasant and adorable. I loved poems since I was in H.S. and still do when I come across one, but often haven't. Keep it up! ♥
2007-04-13 08:33:48 · answer #8 · answered by blah 4 · 1⤊ 1⤋
That was a very beautiful poem-I really liked it!You're talented!
2007-04-13 08:31:49 · answer #9 · answered by black_cat 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
i read it.. Now what would u like me to do.. Oh yeah.. comment.. It's um. Nice.. But maybe you should get out more and stop wasting your poems on chicks using the net..
2007-04-13 08:27:44 · answer #10 · answered by autumn_rebellion 2 · 0⤊ 2⤋
Awwwww, how sweet!
One day you will find the most perfect person to give this masterpiece to!
I wish you well!
2007-04-13 08:26:31 · answer #11 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 1⤋