Thank you. Since you have not allowed to continue the interview, therefore we won't proceed. If you change your mind, you may complete this interview by calling us back.
This is a confidential call for the evaluation of depression.
You will be asked questions about depression in this telephonic interview. It will take about 15 minutes to complete it.
2007-04-13 02:57:46 · 5 answers · asked by Paresh P 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
It looks OK except for the folloing:
Since you have not allowed to continue the interview, therefore we won't proceed.
I'd change it to:
Since you have chosen not to continue the interview, we will not proceed.
or
Since you have not allowed us to continue the interview, we won't proceed.
The others are OK -- though I would use the phrase "telephone interview" instead of "telephonic interview" -- unless you are outside the US.
2007-04-13 03:03:36 · answer #1 · answered by Ranto 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Thank you. Since you have chosen not to continue the interview, therefore we won't proceed. If you change your mind, you may complete this interview by calling us.
This is a confidential call for the evaluation of Depression. You will be asked questions about Depression in this telephone interview. It will take about 15 minutes to complete.
2007-04-13 10:02:09 · answer #2 · answered by Vienna 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
No.
Thank you. Since you have chosen not to allow the interview to continue, we will not proceed. If you change your mind, you may complete this interview by calling us back.
This is a confidential call for the evaluation of depression. You will be asked a series of questions about depression during this phone interview. It will take approximately 15 minutes to complete.
2007-04-13 10:02:32 · answer #3 · answered by Endroren 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The only sentence I would change is:
Since you have not allowed to continue the interview, therefore we won't proceed.
Change it to:
Since you have chosen to not continue the interview, we will not proceed further.
("allowed" isn't the correct word, and "therefore" isn't necessary.)
Hope this helps.
2007-04-13 10:04:25 · answer #4 · answered by ? 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
they are gammatically correct but maybe the order does not seem to be right ...for example...'thank you' would sound better after the next two sentences
2007-04-13 10:04:25 · answer #5 · answered by silver 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋