You capture my heart
When I just hear you laugh
And though we are young
You're my missing half
When you're playing with children
And showing them love
You make my heart beat
Like your sent from above
You capture my heart
With your captivating beauty
And inspire me to make
Caring for you my duty
When you're walking, you move
With such style and grace
And I could study all day
Every line of your face
I'll search high and low
Until each other we find
But now for today
You exist in my mind
I'll learn your inner beauty
On the net when we chat
And know as you type
That my heart's where you're at
When we are apart
It's you I will miss
And long once again
To taste your sweet kiss
I'll embrace you so close
Each night and each day
But for now I will search
Till I find you .................Someday
2007-04-13 02:41:47 · 29 answers · asked by dwsum41@yahoo.com 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Awww...you really tugged at my heart strings.
2007-04-13 02:45:02 · answer #1 · answered by ? 3 · 2⤊ 2⤋
That is a very nice poem, if you wrote it, you need to go enter it in the national Library of poetry contest. It would get you the editors choice award. You write very well.
2007-04-13 09:47:54 · answer #2 · answered by trhwsh 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice poem
2007-04-13 09:49:51 · answer #3 · answered by mary L 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow! THat is so great! i would be thrilled to hear that if it was to me from someone! BUt only send it to her if shes the type thats into a serious relationship.....really sweet!
2007-04-13 09:45:55 · answer #4 · answered by NaturesPixie 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow! If you wrote this you sure won't have a problem sweeping someone off their feet!
2007-04-13 09:52:03 · answer #5 · answered by Rebecca A 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good job- I am very impressed ,there is a lucky girl out there somewhere.
2007-04-13 09:51:05 · answer #6 · answered by Jana 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Thats beautiful! Hope you find your missing half!
2007-04-13 09:46:47 · answer #7 · answered by jennifer y 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
So sweet, you are really in love
2007-04-13 09:52:40 · answer #8 · answered by -Ivanita- 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ah, it almost made me cry. it's sooooooooooooo beautiful, and sweet. you're an excellent poet ^_^
2007-04-13 12:03:36 · answer #9 · answered by ^_^ ♥ §atsuki_☼ushiza ♥ ^_^ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow,it's a good one.great job!
2007-04-13 10:04:28 · answer #10 · answered by aMUSEd 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋