ALONE!
I'll never be alone
I'll never be afraid
As long as he is with me, thru all these scary days.
I'll never say I hate him
I'll always say I care
& I'll always be happy, as long as he is there.
I will forever smile
I'l never have a frown
As long as he is there, to lift me when I'm down.
I'll never make him sad
I'll always make him see
As long as he is there & as long as he loves me.
Sometimes he makes me cry
& sometimes he makes me sad
But iunderstand the meaning - i know sometimes I'm bad.
He'll forever make me think
If I'm worth what he goes thru
Sometimes i have to wonder, if our love is true.
But then i stop myself
From thinking any further
Because I don't know if he's thinking "I will never hurt her."
He promised me he loved me
He promised to make me smile
He told me that I was everything & that i was worth his while.
Then i found out something
That caused my heart to break
Everything that he had told me - it had all been fake.
So i find myself crying
Lying on my bed
Wishing more than anything, that I'd end up dead.
He told me that he loved me
He told me I was the one
He told me i was his everything - even his shining sun.
But everything he had told me
They had all been shallow lies
Why didn't I see thru all that? Why didn't I read his eyes?
I'll always be alone
I'll always be afraid
Now that he is gone it's just me to face these days...
2007-04-13 01:10:21 · 22 answers · asked by stevieglenwright 3 in Family & Relationships ➔ Friends
yeh, i did write it when i was 16 so now you can see why it's a little "immature"
2007-04-13 01:20:33 · update #1
Hey!
Its a lovely Poem...........
I dont know about other's but to me it seemed very touching n very emotional...!!!!!
I culd actually fell the feelings of the person who wrote the poem..........!!!!!
It's a really good poem....!
2007-04-13 01:19:25 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
Nice to peer you Sue.. The poem offers a beautiful snapshot, and in the future we will be able to see what our eyes would now not completely see right here on the earth. We will revel in in fullness the real finishing would possibly not we?! I recognize it's going to be one that's full of pleasure and lots of surprises.
2016-09-05 12:08:59 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds like TOXIC IMMESHMENT. i.e. an unhealthy relationship in which the female has got herself so involved and immeshed in her companion's life and aiming to please him etc that she has lost sight of who she is. This hs then backfired when he has cheated on her, and she then has unresolved issues, such as suppressed anger perhaps harkening back from childhood, which she is feeling melancholic about. Quite frankly, the girl needs to get a grip and find who she is. If you are the poet I guess that may be you, if not, whoever wrote this does sound like a girl who is going through some relationship issues, in which she may not have nurtured herself or felt nurtured as a child. Its quite heavy reading, so there seems to be a lot of emotional frustration there. Just my opinion.
2007-04-13 01:18:33 · answer #3 · answered by bebop 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
But it is good and what did you learn from this experience Life goes on people come and go in life Better to have loved than to never love at all
2007-04-13 01:44:05 · answer #4 · answered by chameleon 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I liked it except "Wishing more than anything,that I'd end up dead"
To me sounds like you found the wrong guy......
Wait until you find the right one...I cant wait until you write a poem about that....
Im sure 99.99% of the girls out there find the wrong guy atleast twice in their life.....
2007-04-13 01:18:12 · answer #5 · answered by dalejr8 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Good work...you told a complete story in just a few compelling lines. Keep writing poetry!
Lighten up, Nickie...we all walk before we run.
2007-04-13 01:17:03 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
that is a really good poem I try to write poems but I'm not that good do you want to be a write when you grow up she should take consideration on being a poem artist or a poem person
2007-04-13 01:31:53 · answer #7 · answered by cookie monster 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋
That was beautiful! It really talks about all your deep feelings! It feels to let is out, huh?
2007-04-13 07:50:56 · answer #8 · answered by Babe 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds very sad and I know you will find the right man... don't give up
2007-04-13 02:13:28 · answer #9 · answered by Pearlinpc 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
very nice! you wrote this? well done.
the use of repitition of some of the words made it sound like it had a nice flow through it.
2007-04-13 01:14:54 · answer #10 · answered by Undecided 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋