Watch grammar.
Is enountered like interface -- a noun-verb?
People today have access to a vast amount of knowledge and information.
But they still need to know mechanics such as punctuation, spelling and grammar.
2007-04-11 04:15:44
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answer #1
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answered by merrybodner 6
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Well, it looks like everyone else interpreted what you wrote one way, and I took it totally differently - I read it as passive voice. So, even though it is a grammatically correct sentence as a passive statement, it seems to be open to misinterpretation, so how about:
In today's world, you encounter individuals with a huge volume of knowledge.
That changes it to active voice.
On the other hand, if those above have the right feel, it may just be a word choice error:
In today's world, individuals are encumbered with a huge volume of knowledge.
2007-04-11 11:39:35
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answered by dollhaus 7
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It should be either:
In today's world, individuals encounter a huge volume of knowledge and information.
or
In today's world, individuals are presented with a huge volume of knowledge and information.
Good luck.
2007-04-11 11:29:21
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answer #3
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answered by Heidi L 2
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No-it's not proper grammar. Here are some alternatives:
In today's world, individuals encounter a huge volume of knowledge and information.
In today's world, individuals are innundated with a plethora of knowledge and information.
2007-04-11 11:33:47
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answered by fizzygurrl1980 7
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No, that is bad grammar.
In the modern world, individuals encounter a huge volume of information.
You can't encounter knowledge. Either you have it or you don't. Knowledge outside of yourself is information.
2007-04-11 11:10:31
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answered by Larry 6
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Change "encountered" to "faced".
Change "volume" to "input".
2007-04-11 11:10:55
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answered by Orion777 5
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You would not put a comma after "world." That's known as a comma splice.
2007-04-11 11:32:11
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answered by ouranticipation 3
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