We can't always get the job that is of our interest but still we can make it interesting by being intersted in it, if you know that you would get paid a lot more than the job that you do just for the sake of entertaining yourself, then it's better to go for the job that doesn't really excite you but pays you much. This will definately make you happy because when you'll receive the amount you'll be satisfied and you know that you can do lots of things with that money. It doesn't matter even if your job is boring, but when you get the money you can spend that money in your hobby and enjoy it to the fullest. Sometimes it happens that you do have a hobby but no money to practice it. Therefore, in my opinion I think it's better to choose the job that is well paid rather than do something just for the sake of entertainment.
2007-04-10
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reshma
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I have had a good look at this, but regret I am unable to rewrite it sensibly, because I cannot decide which side of the argument you wish to put forward.
Are you saying that it is better to have a job which really interests you regardless of the pay, or that a well paid job is better even if it is boring? Until you have made up your mind, I do not feel you can write a satisfactory essay.
What is the title of your essay?
2007-04-10 21:48:48
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answered by Anonymous
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I will give it a try, but I had to rewrite it a bit...OK, well a whole lot actually.
We can’t always get the job that interests us, however any employment would be certainly become more interesting if it paid much more than our present occupation. It would be better to obtain the job that improves your earning potential, as this accomplishment will enable you to do a lot of things you had been previously unable to do. Should the higher paying job be somewhat boring, one can take consolation in the fact that because of your better earnings you could invest in, and enjoy hobbies to the fullest! When compared with the fact that your previous job left very little money for the things you enjoy, what would be the point of staying on? It is my opinion to choose the job that is well paid rather than doing something that is entertaining, yet pays little in comparison.
2007-04-10 22:59:04
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answered by LuckyJack 4
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1. This essay needs to be rewritten.
2. It needs a title. (Best done after essay is
rewritten)
3. It lacks readability. (Ease with which it can
be read. One writes for the reader not the
writer)
4. It has a very high fog index. (Measurement
of extra words that add little to content but
make it difficult to read)
FINDING A JOB
We can't always find a job that fully interests us but can enjoy it somewhat by taking an interest in it. However, you may have a job that interests you somewhat but pays less than one that is less interesting. Perhaps you should be looking for a higher paying job regardless of how interesting it is.
A higher paying job may be more satisfying almost solely because of the higher pay. This may well compensate for the fact that the job may even be boring.
Much of your extra pay can be spent on an enjoyable hobby. Certainly, this is much nicer than having a hobby that you cannot afford.
It's my opinion that it's best to find a job that pays well rather than one that pays less even though it's more interesting.
2007-04-10 23:10:48
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answered by Elizabeth R 2
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2016-12-03 20:13:41
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answered by Anonymous
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Wow, you have got to be the king of run-on sentences. I cannot correct it until you yourself re-write it. Those 5 sentences could be broken up into at least 10 or 15.
2007-04-10 21:22:10
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answered by calebb1982 2
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well.. i see what you are trying to say but i think that you should break up some of the sentences. When you join a lot in one sentence, some people may not be able to understand it. It will also be easier to check your grammar once you have broken down some of the sentences.
2007-04-10 22:46:42
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answered by purplefalls_135 2
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I would re-write this before asking someone to correct it. It rambles too much and lacks pizazz.
2007-04-10 21:16:54
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answered by Alea S 7
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Its loborious!!!!!!!!!!
2007-04-10 21:26:29
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answered by Numil 2
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