Under blankets, under clear open skies
On the trampoline in my backyard, you lay by my side
Holding you colse, the stars reflecting inyuor eyes
Feel your heart beating softly, see the beauty inside
When the conversation ends, and the tears begin to flow
And the longing sets in, and I start feeling cold
I seem empty inside, you're all that's left on my my mind
Then I wish that this could be the end of goodbye
Remember when we would spend hours on the phone
Talk about nothing and never feeling alone
And hanging with friends, watching movies that don't end
Break curfew all the time, and do it later again
Avoiding our parents, Just staying in the car
Staying in the driveway, and looking out at the stars
And as the night starts to fade, I take your hand and touch your face
I'll kiss you one last time, then disappear in this place
When the conversation...
It's about my girlfriend and I when we first started. It's very heartfelt. What do you think?
2007-04-10 06:07:36 · 11 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Awwwwww! Makes my heart melt!
2007-04-10 06:10:35 · answer #1 · answered by ktychaos13 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think it is very sweet. It definitely felt genuine. I liked how you included the part about the trampoline...it made it stand out as honest and special. Well done!!
2007-04-10 06:11:47 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
this is a few downer crap. besides, those are not fairly lyrics, only a lengthy not nicely thought out paragraph. you are able to desire to rearrange it into music or poetry format. in any different case, you have not something yet a paragraph to memorize, or growl out as you so eloquently placed it.
2016-10-28 08:45:35 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very nice
2007-04-10 06:11:08 · answer #4 · answered by Bella 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice. I wish I could hear the melody.
2007-04-10 06:10:26 · answer #5 · answered by JenJen 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's really good. Very sincere, I wish I could hear it.
2007-04-10 06:13:11 · answer #6 · answered by lastbeautflgirl 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very good, you have a natural talent there.
2007-04-10 06:12:55 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats pretty good man
2007-04-10 07:12:21 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its pretty decent....not bad
2007-04-10 06:10:57 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
sweet!
2007-04-10 06:10:25 · answer #10 · answered by Dobby The Great 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋