Am I A Good Poet - I'm Only 14?

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Am I A Good Poet - I'm Only 14?

Am I A Good Poet - I'm Only 14?

These are the two poems I wrote, I am a 14 year old student and just wanted everyones true and honest opinion. Thanks

1 TO MANY


He is gone , his soul still here but his body is no longer , why , because 1 to many people

1 too many people told him he was ugly
1 too many people told him no one cared
1 too many people told him he was stupid

If maybe just 1 person told him he was smart

We would have 1 more person still alive and well


AND THE OTHER ONE IS UNDER HERE

What is Love

The thing that makes us cry , or the thing we all want

Is it really all its cracked up to be

Because the same person that once gave me it

Also gave me the worst day of my life.

She said it was over , and I could of swore it just began .

By Taki

Answer 1

i think they are both very good.

keep writing

Answer 2

I agree w/ rubyz...n violet... I used to write alot as a teen, now I don't seem to have the time. I think some of the most compelling poem's I wrote were when I wz younger. Just need to spell chk. Good stories in a short to the point form. Good work.

Answer 3

So what does being 14 have to do with it? People don't get better at writing poems with age usually.

Answer 4

I think both poems are very good. They are well written and tell a story. Keep writing. Watch your grammar and spelling.

Answer 5

You're a poet and you know it. Your feet show it cause their Longfellows.