You capture my heart
When I just hear you laugh
And though we are young
You're my missing half
When you're playing with children
And showing them love
You make my heart beat
Like your sent from above
You capture my heart
With your captivating beauty
And inspire me to make
Caring for you my duty
When you're walking, you move
With such style and grace
And I could study all day
Every line of your face
I'll search high and low
Until each other we find
But now for today
You exist in my mind
I'll learn your inner beauty
On the net when we chat
And know as you type
That my heart's where you're at
When we are apart
It's you I will miss
And long once again
To taste your sweet kiss
I'll embrace you so close
Each night and each day
But for now I will search
Till I find you .................Someday
2007-04-06 03:38:14 · 22 answers · asked by dwsum41@yahoo.com 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
That is nice
2007-04-06 03:41:07 · answer #1 · answered by Dairy Fairy 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is SO sweet. Great poem! But I hope you don't mind my telling you in the line Like your sent from above it's you're. Just in case you give it to a girl you want to impress or something. My favorite part is lines 3 and 4
2007-04-08 22:24:08 · answer #2 · answered by nemo 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
So romantic and beautiful! Good work! star= you. Maybe wen I'm older my man will read a poem he made to me. 13 sucks!
2007-04-06 10:42:45 · answer #3 · answered by ♥Penguiin♥ 5 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Absolutely beautiful words, written straight from the heart??
You are melting my heart!
2007-04-06 10:42:01 · answer #4 · answered by Tiga 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's very sweet and sensitive. I like that in a man. Sure hope you find her! better yet, she better hope she finds you!
2007-04-06 10:43:21 · answer #5 · answered by georgiarose_01 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This is such a great poem!!! Did you write it?
2007-04-06 15:26:11 · answer #6 · answered by claymate14249 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you are sooo sweet. you make my heart melt with joy and love
2007-04-06 11:17:45 · answer #7 · answered by miss_bi_chica 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
whoa! did u rite that romeo?!?!?! thats really nice and romantic ...but kinda cheesy (joke)
2007-04-06 10:42:35 · answer #8 · answered by ▓▒░ ♫ Pump !t up ♫ ▓▒░ 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
How sweet!
2007-04-06 10:42:02 · answer #9 · answered by brwneyedgrl 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow, that was so sweet - it makes me realize how much of a loser/dick my baby's dad is
2007-04-06 10:41:46 · answer #10 · answered by Sweetness 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋