Can you help me find any grammatical errors in this sentence? Thanks for your help?

Question

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The government of Malaysia expects the government of Qatar (Qatar Petroleum) would give letter of agreement or letter of comfort for accepting Malaysian overseas worker in oil and gas sector supplied by Malaysia as mentioned in point 1

Answer 1

You can say either
"The government of Malaysia expects that the government of Qatar (Qatar Petroleum) would give letter of agreement..."
or
"The government of Malaysia expects the government of Qatar (Qatar Petroleum) to give letter of agreement..."

Plus you are missing a few commas
My corrected version:

The government of Malaysia expects that the government of Qatar (Qatar Petroleum) would give letter of agreement, or letter of comfort, for accepting Malaysian overseas worker in the oil and gas sector supplied by Malaysia, as mentioned in point 1

Answer 2

The corrected article is-

The government of Malaysia expects the government of Qatar (Qatar Petroleum) to give the letter of agreement or the letter of comfort, for accepting Malaysian overseas workers in oil and gas sectors, supplied by Malaysia as mentioned in point 1.

Answer 3

hi

I think it's good so, the main error is in (expects would have) where u must put (to):

"The government of Malaysia expects the government of Qatar (Qatar Petroleum), to hand over (or to give) an agreement letter or comfort letter for accepting Malaysian overseas workers in oil and gas sector, supplied by Malaysia as mentioned in point 1"

Answer 4

would give A letter of agreement
accepting Malaysian overses workerS

Answer 5

Well there is just no grammatical mistake. The only thing is than you did not put a full stop after the statement.

Answer 6

Change 'would' to 'to,' put an 'a' between 'give' and 'letter,' and put an 's' on 'worker.'