Praying for him to live?
Praying for him to die?
Which is the gentle wish
When an old man ends his life?
It is enough not to be taken by the crows.
2007-04-05 14:19:44 · 11 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
and give me a star if you like it
2007-04-05 14:20:37 · update #1
That was a little bit depressive but not bad I gave the star. =)
2007-04-05 15:35:21 · answer #1 · answered by ♥ PrNcPsS ♥ 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
a lovely poem. my thoughts on the subject are this, we should always value life and sometimes to do that we must be willing to let it go. There is never going to be an easy answer to those questions. personally my grandfather passed away because of cancer and I would never have wished him to live longer just to suffer physically for my sake to have him here on earth longer.
2007-04-05 14:50:01 · answer #2 · answered by a_roraback 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2016-11-07 08:11:51 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I must disagree with Nathan on this one...(Which is surprising, as I have agreed with EVERY other review he has given.)
It's very descriptive, without going over-baord...
I do believe you've "Almost" nailed this one, Chap...
What I don't like is the word Gentle...It doesn't fit the poem.....Find something grittier....
2007-04-05 19:45:59 · answer #4 · answered by Jenn 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it's fine.
I like the topic more than the form of the poem, really, but it's simplicity really gives you room to think about the questions it poses, so really, it works pretty well.
2007-04-05 14:30:17 · answer #5 · answered by hobo 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very moving. I have been there before ... I think the right answer is the second one. Here's your star. Pax - C.
2007-04-05 14:29:17 · answer #6 · answered by Persiphone_Hellecat 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it. Sometimes short and simple says all that needs to be said.
2007-04-09 13:33:49 · answer #7 · answered by Tina D 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's all good but why the crows bit?
2007-04-05 14:31:47 · answer #8 · answered by Duncan w ™ ® 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it. The idea is nice but i think you can expand on it the concept. But its fine how it is.
2007-04-05 14:39:25 · answer #9 · answered by Dani 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
good poem
there are so many questions with no right answers
take care
2007-04-05 16:49:22 · answer #10 · answered by Andrea / Princess Bitchalot 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋