okay, heres the deal. I am trying to get another chance to go to this high school that i applyed to and i have to e-mail the principal. can some one proofread?
its too long to put here but if you give me youre e-mail then i'll e-mail it to you. please and thank you!
best answer gets 10 points (i promise)
2007-04-05 12:31:29 · 10 answers · asked by HELLO123 3 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
I'd love to help you, so would so many others. You're in luck. I'm an English language teacher. I do this everyday.
Cerah72@yahoo.com
Good Luck!!!
2007-04-05 12:38:49 · answer #1 · answered by sara 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Anyone who put's their e-mail addy on here is asking to be spammed big time. I notice you don't give your email.
You missed the apostrophe in "here's" in your first paragraph and "it's" in your second paragraph.
It should say "your" and not "youre" (sic) in paragraph two.
"Proof read" is two words
You spelled "applied" wrongly.
Your caps/shift key seems to be broken too.
Here is what you ought to have written:
Good Day. I have an offer to make to you. I am endeavouring, for a second time. to gain entrance into a high school. I am required to send an e-mail to the principal and am seeking someone who would be prepared to proof read this for me.
The e-mail itself is too lengthy to reproduce here. However, if you would be kind enough to provide your e-mail address, I will forward you the said text. Thank you in advance for your kindness.
The best answer will receive ten points. This is my promise to you.
(Applesauce - below - is quite right - it was a careless slip of the finger on my part and completely unforgivable. It would be terribly crass to blame my new keyboard. Therefore, I shall just put my hands up and take the justifiable criticism like a man)
2007-04-05 12:42:15 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
Proof-read
2007-04-05 12:34:36 · answer #3 · answered by asmikeocsit 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Ah, but James R is wrong too. There shouldn't be a period after 'I am endeavoring for a second time' because the next sentence is not an actual sentence.
2007-04-05 13:08:56 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I have a BA degree in English with a concentration in writing and a minor in Journalism. My wife is a Phd. We'd love to help you. dr_nc@yahoo.com
2007-04-05 12:36:30 · answer #5 · answered by DR_NC 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sure! I'd love to help!
blazerbabes62@yahoo.com
2007-04-05 12:33:47 · answer #6 · answered by DiscoBiscuit! 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I would love to help.
Please post it. I dont feel comfortable posting my email on a site where millions of people will see it!!! I really hope you get in. GOOD LUCK!
2007-04-05 13:20:59 · answer #7 · answered by Italian Bella 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sorry too much work...good luck
2007-04-05 12:34:17 · answer #8 · answered by mom of twins 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
jkn_917@yahoo.com
2007-04-05 12:34:17 · answer #9 · answered by jkn 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sure lizcovelli@yahoo.net
2007-04-05 12:35:03 · answer #10 · answered by ? 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋