Wishing well
Come hither thus my treasures fell
to where the wishes once were burning
Contrary to, in well them dwelling
Deeds were drenched of tears from all foolish men.
Smite me ‘o heaven to heave me away
Bring death to my dream of perversity
until then might I heave this tendon in sin
will Hell hath no fury like a woman’s scorn ?
wealth went weary so weary have I become
‘tis the gorges of my beloveds shun
Whence the penny dropped, one by one…
in this ring i suffer, o my sweet paragon.
~ John
2007-04-05 04:11:19 · 18 answers · asked by J o h n 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Beautiful, son. Wonderful, awe inspiring and enchanting. You make me want to jump off a cliff with joy.
2007-04-05 04:13:35 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very very nice. Great word choices and phrases
"until then might I heave this tendon in sin
will Hell hath no fury like a woman’s scorn ?"
I love it.
2007-04-05 04:14:49 · answer #2 · answered by ♥Special K 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Congratulations! Here is your cigar. First of all, I love the fact that it is your "new born."
Let's see. Give me a minute. Uh huh... hither. Okay...smite...okay.. borges (whats a gorge..) okay, shun...
Paragon.
Alright. No coffee yet this morning, but your newborn is rawther lovely. I like the burning wishes quite a lot. Glad to know that people are still writing such intelligent prose. Good work mate.
2007-04-05 04:16:06 · answer #3 · answered by Sleek 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It sounds as if when you first encountered something you gained a false sense of security, then in return letting your guard down became too close and in the end was hurt. now you struggle with the torturous state it has left you in.
2007-04-05 04:15:37 · answer #4 · answered by vballchic815 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It seems pretty, But I don't have a good vocabulary so I don't know what half of the words mean. But, it seems like a nice poem.
2007-04-05 04:14:37 · answer #5 · answered by dianaax33 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Are you William Shakespeare reincarnated. I understood that just about as well as Shakespears poetry.
2007-04-05 04:14:52 · answer #6 · answered by Cuppycake♥ 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's very beautiful..
I love this part..
Whence the penny dropped, one by one…
in this ring i suffer, o my sweet paragon.
Keep on writing more!
2007-04-05 04:16:43 · answer #7 · answered by peixian90 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I don't understand but if I did I'd probably like it I love poetry!!!
2007-04-05 04:15:32 · answer #8 · answered by Carrie Ann 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sort of makes me not want to visit a wishing well anymore... AHHHHH!!!
2007-04-05 04:13:31 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very WELL written. No pun intended.
2007-04-05 04:14:38 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋