Need a Thesis or Intro for my Research Paper?

Question

I am doing an Argumentative Research Paper. My Argument is to get the readers convinved that Miss America does contribute to the society.

Please help my think of a good thesis or Intro.
***Best Answer Will Get the Vote***

Answer 1

How about this for a thesis statement:

Despite negative connotations of swimsuit competitions and airhead answers to even more ridiculous "interview" questions, today's Miss America is an avid volunteer to important causes, as well as a public speaker and role model for young women.

Answer 2

The Miss America organization provides young women with a vehicle to further their personal and professional goals and instills a spirit of community service through a variety of unique nationwide community-based programs. On an annual basis, Miss America state titleholders, along with the organization's network of volunteers, participate in more than 12,000 volunteer service projects, providing in excess of 500,000 service hours to worthy causes.