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that is my essay. the teacher said i needed to write a short conclusion. like a short paragraph at the end. dont know what to write :( please someone help! ive asked this question like 3 times
2007-04-02 18:48:10 · 9 answers · asked by Anonymous in Beauty & Style ➔ Fashion & Accessories
the essay is about good samaritans and how an experience has effected me in my life. and that what i wrote about. but my teacher says i need a good ending conclusion for it. has to be a short paragraph
2007-04-02 18:57:30 · update #1
my teacher said i need to make a clonclusion and connect it to my life or something. only one small paragraph!
2007-04-02 19:05:02 · update #2
The world needs Good Samaritans. If we never helped people, without expecting anything in return, what would our world come to? What if everyone had just walked by this man and left him there, not caring for his life? We need each other and we need to care about each other. If we don't help others, how can we expect others to give us assistance when we need help? be a Good Samaritan. Help others.
btw, i thought what you wrote was very good :)
peace and God bless
2007-04-02 19:02:04 · answer #1 · answered by Shadow Lark 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Okay, since no one else will step up to the plate, I shall.
I have found out that being a good samaritan in "my" life has worked many wonders. It has taught me humility, patience, the ability to give advice when asked, and the ability to keep my mouth shut when it needed to stay shut. When one is the good samaritan, one needs to step back after the fact, not to admire what has been done for the other person, but thank GOD for the ability TO DO for the other person. Just like John Kennedy said, "Ask NOT what your country can do for you. Ask what you can do for your country."
Is this a good enough ending for you? Hope you get an "A".
2007-04-02 19:45:27 · answer #2 · answered by traveller1950@sbcglobal.net 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The last paragraph needs to tie back to the first paragraph. The last paragraph should answer the question, "what did you learn about being a good Samaritan" or "is this important in this day or just an ancient story?". If the story is important, tell the reasons why you think so.
Don't quit now. You can do it!!!
2007-04-02 19:04:21 · answer #3 · answered by Candace C 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
In conclusion, the world would be a better place if "the good Samaritan" was a philosophy that more people followed. Then there would be little crime and no war, because you would want to help and not harm all other people.
Hope that helps, B
2007-04-02 18:59:09 · answer #4 · answered by Barb Outhere 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'm a seventh grader too! I might be able to help you:
And in conclusion,I hope everyone can be just like that.And I,too will be a good Samariton and spread the word so people can be a Goood Samaritions,too.I think the world would be an awesome place if people were all Good Samaritons.
maybe that does it....?
2007-04-02 18:56:55 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your teacher probably wants you to write a summary.
You want to touch on the highlights of your essay, summing up what you said in the other part of the essay. Drawing it to a close.
Touch on certain points to remind the reader how you got to the conclusion that you did in the end.
Need to know what your essay was on in order to help you out with anymore.
2007-04-02 18:58:12 · answer #6 · answered by barbara b 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Must be nice to have the internet so you can try to coax others into giving you answers without having to actually think...
MY short conclusion to your little dilemma...Get a brain & figure it out yourself, slacker.
2007-04-02 18:57:37 · answer #7 · answered by bigern1977 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
well i think the conclusion should be this:
a boy got hurt and 2 lovely people did not ignore the situation and helped the poor fello from his accident and the boy as greatfull for it and thanked them for it to so it is not bad to help someone when they are in need because when you are in danger or you need help someone will be there to help you....
2007-04-02 19:02:28 · answer #8 · answered by delly 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
does it have 2 be a spefic topic?
2007-04-02 18:54:23 · answer #9 · answered by ? 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋