Mothers around the world
Moms around the world each have their own unique form of parenting skills that differs between cultures, but they all share the unconditional love that bonds them to their children. Even though, my mother, grandmother, and aunt have different parenting skills that they share with children and family. First of all, I love my mother for the guidance, love, respect, and compassion she always had for me, also for the proper things she always taught me. My mother’s amazing daily sacrifices has never been forgotten she would do anything in the world for me; she didn’t care how she felt because as long as she knew she was happy, she was fine. I appreciated her a lot when she would say “Even if I am poor, even if I don’t have what others have, I have fine young men and women that I am raising at home to be good people in our society. Moreover, my aunt is very strict with her parenting skills, it differs because on how she raised her son. Like ever
2007-04-01
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Mothers Around the World
Moms around the world each have their own unique form of parenting skills that differ between cultures, but they all share unconditional love that bonds them to their children. My mother, grandmother, and aunt have different parenting skills that they share with children and family.
I love my mother for the guidance, love, respect, and compassion she has always had for me, and also for the proper things she has always taught me. My mother’s amazing daily sacrifices have never been forgotten; she would do anything in the world for me; she didn’t care how she felt because as long as she knew she was happy, she was fine.
I appreciated her a lot when she would say “Even if I am poor, even if I don’t have what others have, I have fine young men and women that I am raising at home to be good people in our society.
Moreover, my aunt is very strict with her parenting skills; they differ because of how she raised her son.
2007-04-01 14:46:10
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answered by Nanneke 4
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Moms around the world all have their own unique form of parenting skills that differ between cultures, but they all share the unconditional love that bonds them to their children. My mother, grandmother, and aunt have different parenting skills that they share with children and family. First of all, I love my mother for the guidance, love, respect, and compassion she always had for me, and also for the proper things she always taught me. My mother’s amazing daily sacrifices have never been forgotten. She would do anything in the world for me; she didn’t care how she felt because as long as she knew she was happy, she was fine. I appreciated her a lot when she would say “Even if I am poor, even if I don’t have what others have, I have fine young men and women that I am raising at home to be good people in our society." Moreover, my aunt is very strict with her parenting skills; they differ because of how she raised her son. Like ever
2007-04-01 15:10:58
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answered by dollhaus 7
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Mothers around the world
Moms around the world each have their own unique form of parenting skills that differ between cultures, yet they all share an unconditional love that bonds them to their children. Even though my Mother, Grandmother and Aunt have different parenting styles, which they share with children and family. (incomplete sentence) I love my mother for her guidance, love, respect and the compassion she always had for me; as well as the skills she taught me. My mother’s amazing, daily sacrifices have never been forgotten, and she would do anything in the world for me. She didn’t care how she felt because as long as she knew I was happy, she was fine. I appreciated her strength, when she would say, “Even if I am poor, even if I don’t have what others have, I have fine young men and women that I am raising at home to be good people in our society. Moreover, my aunt is very strict with her parenting skills, which would show in the type of person her son grew into.
2007-04-01 14:51:07
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answered by Not your average jane 1
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Okay. It's grammar, not "grammer." Spell check first, then check for grammatical issues.
. . . skills that differ (not differs)
No comma after "Even though,"
Comma is optional but not preferred between "grandmother, and aunt . . ."
". . . daily sacrifices have never . . . " (not "has never")
A period after forgotten. Capital "She would do . . ."
". . . I have a fine young man . . ." (not "I have a fine young men")
. . . and women? She has daughters too? In that case, it should be something like "I have a fine young man and two girls . . ."
Moreover is not appropriate because you are not really adding to the last sentence. Your aunt is a different subject. A more appropriate way to say it is "In contrast, my aunt is very strict . . ."
A period after skills. "They (the skills) differ . . . " (no "s" after "differ")
"They differ in how she raises her son." (Not "on how")
"Like ever" is an incomplete sentence and should be deleted.
2007-04-01 14:48:36
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answered by Anonymous
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Delete 'each' after 'world'.
'Differ', not 'differs'.
No comma after 'Even though'. The sentence starting with 'Even though' is incomplete.
Add 'and' between 'for me,' and 'also for'.
'Sacrifices have', not 'has'.
Add a semicolon after 'forgotten' and before ' she would', and a full stop instead of comma after 'for me', and start the next word as 'She'.
'She didn't care how she felt because as long as she knew she was happy, she was fine'. Here, what probably you have in mind is ' we were happy' and not 'she was happy'.
After 'our society', add a (") to close the quotation.
Instead of 'Moreover', you could choose 'On the other hand' or 'In contrast' or words to that effect.
The sentence 'Moreover, my aunt..' is not clear. Maybe what you could do is to add a full top after 'skills', delete the comma; and the latter part of this sentence could read 'She raised her son differently'.
The words 'Like ever' do not make a complete sentence.
2007-04-01 15:12:43
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answered by greenhorn 7
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differ not differs
2007-04-01 16:00:16
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answered by Dave 4
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