I'm not realy sure about my outline if there is any mistakes and not organazed well i would be happy to have some ideas. Thanks for help.
Thesis statement: Money and material are not the way one can feel successful in life.
Topic sentence1: First of all, love is the greatest success of all.
a) in family
b) friends
c) education
Topic sentence2: In addition, it gives a lot of benefits.
a) happiness
b) health
c )self confidence
d) positive thinking
e) rigth decision
Topic sentence 3: Finally, these will help to reach our goals.
a) good career
b) life
2007-03-31
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