I will always remember him no matter what. It has been more than a year later when I first met him on the school bus. I would describe him with short black hair, deep dark brown eyes, an amazing smile, and a very sweet voice. He has this unforgettable presence that leaves you thinking about him. Even though it seems impossible, when I am around him, my heart starts racing faster and faster yet it slows down at the same time; my heart may even skip a beat at times. My nerves never get the best of me because they don’t even exist; I feel almost too comfortable around him. In my mind, I think about him all the time. Whenever he talks to me, I feel like the luckiest girl ever to just hear his thoughts and feelings. Whenever I open my mailbox to check my email, I go crazy and wild over his written words. I think it is more than a crush; maybe even it could be love. I know love takes a lot and it is a different feeling than you have with anyone else. If only he felt the same way about me, it would make me so happy. I, of course, have no chance with him. He is in love with her. I will wait for him for us to be together but not forever.
2007-03-31 09:24:05 · 7 answers · asked by Nemo 2 in Social Science ➔ Psychology
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2007-03-31 10:07:54 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
ok i'm basically sixteen so idk if this is going to be any stable yet I easily have written poetry interior the previous that replaced into exceptionally stable so... right here is going. Your basically a fallen stray Left and forgot and not utilising a hint You seek for some seem after from the rain For it is going to floor all your discomfort there remains a flicker on your eyes yet marks are seen from all your cries Your stark touch transcends my perception That love can cool the hearth reported as grief So I grant help below moon and twilight And deliver into the abyss all your fright With my senses i wish to heal your soul For no person merits a existence that chilly It became out ok i think of!
2016-11-25 02:37:57 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well first of all you've got some terrible grammar mistakes. Then you've got the narrative changing from past to present tense in the same paragraph. On top of that you've got what is essentially a self-involved diary entry from an adolescent mind. On the bright side, I couldn't find any spelling errors in a cursory glance.
2007-03-31 10:20:22 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
If you are happy being around him and being friends then I think it's great. I just hate to see you put your life on hold waiting for someone who is taken already. Keep an open mind and don't turn down dates with other people to wait on him. If it is meant to be it will happen, but in the mean time go on living life for yourself and enjoy his friendship.
2007-03-31 10:58:05 · answer #4 · answered by vanhammer 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
For one thing which is very obvious, that person knows nothing about punctuation! They are also very confused about relationships, sounds almost like a borderline personality disorder.
2007-03-31 09:29:53 · answer #5 · answered by elecampane2 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I think the person writing it has a very immature and unrealistic "take" on love and relationships. She must be very, very young.
2007-03-31 09:34:10 · answer #6 · answered by clarity 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
nice, poetic imagery it creates in the readers' mind.
2007-03-31 22:46:41 · answer #7 · answered by Analyst 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋