I was in bed and the wind had picked up I herd a scratching sound on my window I thought the wind I try to go to sleep but I then heard a scratching sound from the hall way I shivered I then heard it again in my door way I screamed my mom and dad were heavy sleepers I couldent get them awake I then heard the scraching from under my bed I looked under my bed and saw an injured dog under my bed I picked up the injured dog when a womans finger nails cluched my ankle I screamed and looked to see a girl holding a teddy bear in her hand bleeding saying I felloff my bike would you get me a band aid I saw her bike out side I did go get a band aid when I got ack in the the room my parents were haning in my room dead by a thick strong rope. I cried and heard nothing but a bike riding past my house and a girls laugh I screamed....
2007-03-31 04:21:20 · 12 answers · asked by Kendall Gotcher 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Good imagination ! I like scary stories .
2007-03-31 04:27:02 · answer #1 · answered by EM 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If you think that this REALLY happened then you need serious help and meds, Now, if this is a story you are writing or a book you are working on then cool. But it needs work. If you are just trying to be stupid well you are exceeding expectations!
2007-03-31 11:28:24 · answer #2 · answered by Patsfan34 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
pretty good.
tip: use punctuation-i found it really hard to read never mind get the atmoshphere. Also, cut the band aid bit. That makes it a little bit stupid.
2007-03-31 11:48:49 · answer #3 · answered by the_black_dance1 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's more or less like Poltergeist and the Six Sense put together
2007-03-31 11:26:56 · answer #4 · answered by mariee64 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is Satan and the only remedy for that is the Blood of Jesus Christ.
The name of Jesus is your protection and shield against evil, so use it, he wants you to.
Read your Bible and see how Jesus had power and authority over these demons.
2007-03-31 11:26:11 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i say you're no stephen king and you need to learn how to write because a lot of people hate run on sentences including me if anyone ever talked like this they would be dead from lack of air........
2007-03-31 11:36:38 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Lol, I liked it, but if your planning to publish it you could sort out your spelling and grammer mistakes.
2007-03-31 11:27:12 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not that scary. lt has been done in the movies before.
2007-03-31 11:33:42 · answer #8 · answered by ? 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is pretty steven kingish
2007-03-31 11:58:17 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nightmare....
2007-03-31 11:25:57 · answer #10 · answered by kayboff 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋